Waiting game; 1/1

Oct 04, 2007 16:14

Title: Waiting game
Pairing: House, implied House/Cameron, Cameron/Chase
Rating: PG
Summary: Cameron and Chase give House a ride home, and his relationship assessment begins. Short post-The Right Stuff fic.

from the beginning i could see exactly how it would end 
-she wants revenge

The engine spluttered, coughed, and died. House ground his teeth in ( Read more... )

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enots October 4 2007, 07:46:57 UTC
You've been inspired I see...
Beautifully written and wonderfully in character, the last paragraph is particularly telling with the exchange of looks. And once again, your Chase is pitch-perfect (I always love when you write Chase).

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teenwitch77 October 5 2007, 05:06:08 UTC
Whoa, I'm all distracted by your icon... pretty.

I have to say, I really like what the first two episodes of season 4 hinted at, House/Cameron/Chase wise. Just an implied tension that may or may not actually be there. And I remembered that picture of the third/fourth episode, with House coming face to face with the pair of them. It made me excited.

But anyway, thank you for reading ;) I love writing Chase (I'm supposed to have written him for the ficathon, crap)

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jeonggam October 4 2007, 09:57:59 UTC
Okay. YES. Thank you. This is absolutely perfect. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if this happened in the next episode! *grins*

Really, it completely fits with where the characters are at at the moment, and Cameron being the mediator is wonderful. I think you absolutely capture the tension and awkwardness that this situation would warrant.

Wonderful!

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teenwitch77 October 5 2007, 05:07:14 UTC
I hope we get some kind of interaction between the three of them! It would be terrific.

Thank you ;)

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strawberrytatoo October 4 2007, 11:06:43 UTC
Wow, I loved this! The awkwardness was palpable, and everything was just so beautifully written.

Naughty naughty House, stirring up trouble, hehe!

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teenwitch77 October 5 2007, 05:07:28 UTC
Heh, thank you for reading.

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fated_addiction October 4 2007, 13:05:31 UTC
CHASE.

Oh, yes. Em, this is brilliant. The car ride from hell! *grins* Oh, man. You've laced so much in here; the tension, the directions that both Chase and Cameron are going, but really don't acknowledge. House trying to pick them apart. The H/C.

I'm really not that eloquent this early in the morning, but, bb, fantastic, fantastic job.

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teenwitch77 October 5 2007, 05:10:05 UTC
YOUR ANGRY CHASE COMMENT HELPED, CHRISSY.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I really liked the Right Stuff for that reason, the implied tension bubbling under the surface with everyone.

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cozy_cupcake October 4 2007, 13:06:40 UTC
This is perfect.

Even as she did so her gaze slid away, over House, connecting directly with his through the windshield. There was an intensity and subtle, reluctant unhappiness in her expression that made him stare right back.

This made me think of prison, not that I've ever been there (lol), but Cameron's cellmate is Chase and not by choice.

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teenwitch77 October 5 2007, 05:11:03 UTC
Oh thanks. I like that description of it. We can all see where things have inevitably been headed, and I can only feel pity for Chase.

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