title: mea culpa pairing: jim, pam, jim/pam rating: pg summary: everything between them is marred by some kind of sadness now. post 3x18 cocktails. notes: for
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I'm really glad you liked it. Can't wait to hear your thoughts. Because I think I reread this so many times before posting it my head might have exploded.
Oh thank you, sweets. I love writing Pam. Seriously, she might be my new favourite Cameron.
He wasn't actually outside her apartment (?), but don't worry, I completely get what you mean. I think I just wanted to give it a happy resolve and to be honestt (okay, so this is bad) I couldn't really be bothered dealing with the complications of Jim/Karen. And I didn't mean that to be an ending for Jim/Karen, there was supposed to be implied tension after that scene was over, but I was TOTALLY thinking what you said when I was rereading it. That Jim felt like he faded off a bit for the sake of a happy ending. I honestly can't predict how he's going to react to this whole thing - God can't wait to see it. GAH!
♥ You're awesome for being honest enough to tell me that, you know that?
Lovely. Really in character -- this whole thing felt so Pam-ish.
My favorite line: In a way his voice is sad, tinged with a kind of regret she knows wouldn’t have been there if she had just said yes the first time. Because OH and YES and just... good. Beautifully phrased and -- well, thoughtful is the wrong word, but you know what I mean. Something like it. Great dialogue.
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I'm really glad you liked it. Can't wait to hear your thoughts. Because I think I reread this so many times before posting it my head might have exploded.
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He wasn't actually outside her apartment (?), but don't worry, I completely get what you mean. I think I just wanted to give it a happy resolve and to be honestt (okay, so this is bad) I couldn't really be bothered dealing with the complications of Jim/Karen. And I didn't mean that to be an ending for Jim/Karen, there was supposed to be implied tension after that scene was over, but I was TOTALLY thinking what you said when I was rereading it. That Jim felt like he faded off a bit for the sake of a happy ending. I honestly can't predict how he's going to react to this whole thing - God can't wait to see it. GAH!
♥ You're awesome for being honest enough to tell me that, you know that?
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My favorite line: In a way his voice is sad, tinged with a kind of regret she knows wouldn’t have been there if she had just said yes the first time. Because OH and YES and just... good. Beautifully phrased and -- well, thoughtful is the wrong word, but you know what I mean. Something like it. Great dialogue.
Awesome job! I really liked this.
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