Thicker Than Blood - Chapter 5

[teekoness]

Title: Thicker Than Blood
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Cloud, Rufus, Reno
Summary: Cloud Strife never returned to Nibelheim. AU
Author’s Note: This one’s a short chapter but no matter how I played with it, it insisted on ending earlier than I was expecting. At least you get to meet another PoV character.

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[sinnatious]

A chapter! About the Turks, and their schemes and emotional ninja by-plays. Quickly, though, I noticed quite a few mistakes in this chapter

[teekoness]

Okay, I went back and fiddled a bit. Honestly it doesn't seem to matter if I write when I'm tired or not; sometimes I just can't catch my own mistakes until I've posted. I keep on meaning to find a beta but I ever get around to it. Either way thanks for pointing those things out.

I adore writing Reno. The guy practically writes himself. He's a cunning, hilarious bastard. Though I do wonder how Elena going to cope with getting stuck with him as a mentor. That is one thing I haven't planned out yet.

[sinnatious]

Know what you mean, they're all just typos really, and your eyes simply slide right over them. And when you're typing, your fingers sometimes just muscle-memory their way to a vaguely similar word and you never even notice...

Haha, looking forward to it! As cagey as Reno is in this, it was nice reminder than Tseng is still the real head Turk.