wanting to ask you about the weather on that side.

Mar 26, 2014 01:05

pairing: baekhyun/jongdae
rating: pg-13
wordcount: 1.6k
warnings: -
summary: "do i even dare use the word love?"
notes: divergent!au. i pretty much have only watched the movie today, so i'm sorry for inaccuracies! i just wanted to write something set in that universe. title from chen and liyin's breath.

once, twice, thrice. )

p: fanfiction, r: pg-13, s: baekhyun/jongdae

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keuriwoseo March 26 2014, 02:04:44 UTC
flails around because divergent au!!! and baekchen's relationship dynamics here are pretty much perfect ;;;
thank you for sharing this gr8 fic!!

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teddyescher March 26 2014, 04:08:38 UTC
sobs tysm! i'm really glad you enjoyed it, i really just wrote this on a whim because the movie was so nice!!!
thank you for reading and the lovely comment <3

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i_nfinitely March 26 2014, 07:12:21 UTC
this was beautiful ;; i love the way you wrote baekhyun & jongdae's relationship, as well as the characterisation. ofc baekhyun would be Dauntless ahaha
i loved divergent, and i love this as well ;u;
thank you for writing this!!

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teddyescher March 28 2014, 10:36:20 UTC
wah thank you so much! and yes haha my friend and i had this huge long conversation about which exo member would be where
i'm looking forward to this au a lot lmao
thank you for reading! and the comment :3

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bcnf3nf March 26 2014, 17:30:28 UTC
i haven't read or watched divergent, but i just need to say this is so beautifully written, i don't even know how something written on a whim could be so good :')

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teddyescher March 28 2014, 10:36:49 UTC
thank you so much! glad you enjoyed it! :> thanks for reading!

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bcnf3nf March 29 2014, 15:07:38 UTC
pleasure's mine, i love all your stories, esp the baekchen ♥

hello ted do you remember the awkward aff anon who forced you to read all her stories, that's me

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teddyescher March 29 2014, 15:13:44 UTC
haha yes, i definitely remember you! thanks for dropping by here :3 we should be friends, heehee, i'd like to have more baekchen stans to talk to

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baeklights March 26 2014, 20:44:27 UTC
ahhhh, omg. i kind of want to. reread divergent even though i only read it once and never read the book(s??) after it.

a soft little laugh, the laugh he keeps for Jongdae, and only him, Jongdae hopes, only him and nobody else, because who else would listen for the huff of air between teeth, the almost-sharp burst of brightness that starts somewhere in his chest, the laugh that Jongdae wants to keep hidden in the palm of his hands and in the live-wires that run from the tips of his fingers to the thump of his heart, just for him, for him and no other.
sdfgtygvasdcgvcazsdxfvgdf ♥

“Baekhyun,” says Jongdae, mouth moving to form the syllables of Baekhyun’s name, over and over and over, until it’s just a mess of sound
teach me how to do words like yoooou.

What do we know of love?”
“Nothing,” says Baekhyun, “but I know you, and that’s enough.”
UGH. MY HEART.

i love this. i love that even though it's au, their dynamics are the same. ;~; your fic. you should keep writing baekchen fic forever bc you are one of my faaaves. ♥

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teddyescher March 28 2014, 10:39:49 UTC
i haven't read the books yet orz i might though! they seem pretty promising though idk on the whole first person pov thing

dfjgdlkjhgdfgd i always get so fuzzy when you comment on things guhhhhh

thank you sobs i'm glad you liked it!!! more baekchen more fun (also whispers are you possibly maybe gonna join the baekchen fic exchange huhu) <3 thanks for reading

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baeklights March 28 2014, 19:45:40 UTC
i am the same when i get comments from you. all the fuzzy feelings. <333

there is a baekchen fic exchange??? :o

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teddyescher March 29 2014, 06:14:24 UTC
yes!!! well for now it's mostly being spread around on twitter but it'll be somewhere in oct/nov eeeeeeep :3

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lycorisc March 30 2014, 01:24:42 UTC
u never go wrong with baekchen ilu and your au's <3

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teddyescher March 30 2014, 11:51:36 UTC
glad you liked it ;3; thanks for reading! <3

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