Comments | teddyescher: 140408 ; break and bend me as you ride me

teddyescher

140408 ; break and bend me as you ride me

Apr 08, 2014 01:39

( burning )

c: lj idol, p: personal

Comments 14

kagomeshuko April 9 2014, 03:08:39 UTC

Ooh, kinda creepy . . .

i_will_not_say April 9 2014, 15:27:45 UTC

You did well with writing the creepy!

tatdatcm April 10 2014, 04:28:03 UTC

Ooh! Creepy! Nice use of the prompt.

jem0000000 April 10 2014, 08:04:23 UTC

Poor dude; it's a harsh punishment for what on the surface seems to be a small infraction. (I am assuming there's probably a respect issue buried in that somewhere, though.)

solstice_singer April 10 2014, 20:17:50 UTC

Very well-written. I could feel his fear and his pain.