Title: Endless Moment (09/??)
Rating: PG13
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Master ListSummary: Sequel to Mr. Elric. It's obvious now that the community of Hogwarts wants a piece of Mr. Edward Elric, be in knowledge or attention. Ed's privacy is further invaded when forces beyond his control insist on contact with The Boy Who Lived.
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Harry telling his friends seems all too true to HP canon, but I can't help but feel indignant for Ed. This chapter seems a bit rushed, Ed asking for Harry's help, telling him things, but I guess that's what happens when you fall face flat into a pensieve. Gosh I love Ed's humor, and I love how he still lives by equivalent exchange. Of course he would.
Will happily wait as long as it takes for the next chapter. ♥
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I do agree that this chapter was rushed, but at the same time, I didn't want to write another one (at the pace I'm going) and have nothing happen.
I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner; my email was putting LJ stuff in the Spam box. X.x Thank you again!
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It's good you made one, since I wouldn't have been able to find this great story otherwise (found it through fanfiction.net)
Well, I really enjoyed reading it (including "mr.elric" and the sidestories) and hope for an update very soon. Your story really is originally since it's the only (!) crossover with HP with ed NOT beeing teacher or student ==° And I think the charas are acting really authentic and I just love reading what happens next. Your stile is just amazing and I'm very sorry I'm not able to leave a long comment and write everything down I would like to. English is not my native language but you seem to understan german really good (I even considered you beeing from Germany and just writing an english fiction but that's not the case, is it?) so maybe I can leave you a german comment? ^^° It would definetly be a lot longer than this. I'm so sorry I can't write you how great I think your work is but at least I wanted to give you a comment and let you know that you've got a fan more
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To answer your question, no, I'm not from Germany. I had my friend (who's a third year German student) double check any German I did write in, but I can't speak it by myself.
Thank you so much for taking time to write a comment at all even though English is not your first language, I am endlessly inspired by readers like you. ^___^~♥
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