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teasingwench

Beautiful Disaster - Harry Potter - Draco/Hermione - Chapter 17

Feb 13, 2007 21:53

Title: Beautiful Disaster
Author: ashleyfanfic
Chapter: 17/??
Rating for this chapter: R/NC-17
Summary: Veela!Draco finds out some interesting information and it leads him and his father in a new direction.

( Chapter 17 )

hermione granger, draco malfoy, draco/hermione, beautiful disaster

Comments 6

moonjameskitten February 14 2007, 10:47:32 UTC

I'm so glad you keep on writing that wonderful story ! and this chapter worths the waiting !
It is sweet and hot at the same time. Really realistic as Hermione is still totally award of the coming War and the consequencies of their mating. I like the discussion she got with Lucius and of course, the 'conversation' *cough cough* with Draco ! *biiiig Smile*
Thanks for updating and I hope to read more soon !!
:)

kit_84 February 14 2007, 14:21:07 UTC

You made my day when I saw you updated!
And that chapter was really amazing! Hot and sweet at the same time. I also really like Lucius/Hermione conversation.

Brilliant!

♥

lionpride042004 February 14 2007, 15:28:06 UTC

You have no clue how happy that has made me. Then again, maybe you do. I always look forward to your updates and can't wait for more. :D As far as constructive criticism goes, there is none, or at least none that I could catch. And to think, I used to be an English Minor. HA!

scarlet125 May 23 2007, 05:23:52 UTC

PLEASE update? I know you're busy with other stories but this one has me stuck. I loved the beginning when it moved along a bit more and their meetings and Hermione's denial but now that they're finally together, I never want to see them apart. I found it by accident actually, and if you haven't read in my reviews before, you inspired me to start writing my own Veela stories. My best one finished a few months ago and is now being made into a game and video! I put your name on my fanfiction.net profile to thank you for introducing me to Veela concepts. Yours is one of the best ones out there ( ... )

teasingwench May 23 2007, 14:08:51 UTC

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad to know that there are people out there that are inspired by my fic. And I'm so happy that you're finding such success with your fic.

As you said, I don't actually need an artist ;), but I appreciate the offer all the same. Thanks for reading and the new part should be up soon. That's actually my mission for today is to get the first half written and finish it tomorrow.

scarlet125 May 23 2007, 20:27:26 UTC

YES!!! Looking forward to it.