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tearupthesky

baby, i don't wanna fight with you

Nov 01, 2009 08:32

OH GOD, so here's the thing?

as completely stoked as i am for yuletide, there is nothing on my list that i want half as badly as LEWIS NIXON/DAVID HENRIE.

of course, there's no way to ask for that, anywhere, ever.

... EXCEPT MAYBE RIGHT HERE, RIGHT NOW?!

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i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 1, NC-17) annakovsky November 3 2009, 07:31:46 UTC

FIRSTLY, I WOULD LIKE TO THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS CHALLENGE HAPPEN. SECONDLY, GOOD PROMPT CHOICE. THIRDLY, THIS "COMMENTFIC" GOT A LITTLE OUT OF CONTROL. Whoops. Enjoyyyyy ( ... )

i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 2, NC-17) annakovsky November 3 2009, 07:32:35 UTC

Somehow Nix must have taken a couple steps across the room, because suddenly he's got the front of David's shirt clenched in his fist, pulling David off-balance with it, but he doesn't actually remember moving to do that. "Shut up," Nix says. His voice is hoarse, and his vision has actually gone sort of red, and somewhere in the back of his mind some rational part of him's saying that he can't just grab Henrie like this, but he can barely hear that part of him over the part that wants to smash Henrie's face in. "Shut the fuck up."

Henrie looks really taken aback, a little scared, but he pulls some extra bravado out from wherever he keeps it and the scared expression disappears again. "What?" he says. "It doesn't bother you to hear about, does it? I'm complimenting your work here. He's an expert now. He was begging me to fuck him ( ... )

i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 3, NC-17) annakovsky November 3 2009, 07:34:04 UTC

David doesn't even really know what possessed him to come in here and say all that to Mr. Nixon. It's just -- Nick getting David to fuck him was pretty shocking, even to David's lax sensibilities. And David's been thinking a lot about it since, how Mr. Nixon must've taught him to do that. And just, Jesus. Nick was sixteen when he was hitting it with Mr. Nixon, and he wasn't an old sixteen, either. He was homeschooled, and a pastor's kid, and kind of shy, and David bets he had some sweet, sort of innocent crush on Mr. Nixon, and what, did Mr. Nixon just bend him over a desk one day? And then dump him like it didn't even mean anything, leave him all in pieces for David to try to pick up again? Like, who does that ( ... )

i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 4, NC-17) annakovsky November 3 2009, 07:35:23 UTC

Maybe Nick wasn't so misguided, having sex with an old guy all that time. Because it turns out Mr. Nixon's pretty goddamn good at it, like all that experience really does help. Because, Jesus, it's just a handjob and suddenly David can't think about anything but the hand on his dick. He's not even really jerking Mr. Nixon off anymore, since he can't concentrate on his own movements, his hand all stuttery and off-rhythm ( ... )

i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 5, NC-17) annakovsky November 3 2009, 07:36:54 UTC

His fingers are stretching David out, moving slowly and steadily, pressing in deep, and then they press something inside David that makes him make a sharp, loud noise, see stars a little bit. "Fuck," David gasps. That's embarrassing, reacting like that, jerking forward, but he couldn't help it. He tries to catch his breath, and after a second he remembers Mr. Nixon asked him a question. "Next to the pool," he gasps out. A second later he remembers he's pretending they did it a lot, and adds, "The first time, anyway. We were skinny dipping after hours ( ... )

i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 6, NC-17) annakovsky November 3 2009, 07:38:00 UTC

Mr. Nixon's hand circles back around to David's cock, holding it tight, tugging on it slowly, and oh God, David doesn't even know if he's thinking about his ass or his cock more, it's all one crazy feeling, like he's flying apart. Mr. Nixon's started this steady, unrelenting rhythm, pounding into him, his hand moving on David's dick in time with it, and David's just following him, moving any way Mr. Nixon wants him to. He feels like he's totally relinquished control, like he's so full and focused that it's all he can do not to be limp as a ragdoll on the couch ( ... )

i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 7, NC-17) annakovsky November 3 2009, 07:38:40 UTC

David doesn't know how long they stay like that, all damp and hot and weird, catching their breath. Just -- that was strange. Hot as hell, and kind of awful at the same time. Finally Mr. Nixon pulls out of him, finds a pile of paper towels on one of the side tables and tosses David a bunch. They clean themselves up in silence. David... really doesn't know what he's supposed to say to him now. He doesn't really know why he did all that ( ... )

Re: i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 7, NC-17) pressdbtwnpages November 3 2009, 08:23:12 UTC

Happy Tuesday to me. I have a lot of feelings about this.

I love that it echoes Nick-and-Dick's first time (aaand now maybe I REALLY want Nix/Dick/Nick/David fic) and that it's both hot and kind of awful and David such an enjoyable little jerk.

Anyway, most enjoyable.

Re: i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 7, NC-17) konstantine03 November 3 2009, 11:24:30 UTC

Good LORD woman! I...my brain has lost the ability to function properly. *fans self*

Just...wow. That was so twisted, and messed up, but also totally worked given the situation. The bit that killed me dead was definitely this though:

And as he holds him there, in a low, quiet voice Mr. Nixon says, "Sure. Yeah. Those noises." He sounds weirdly sad, but David can't care about that now.

POOR NIX. Realising that David and Dick have both got to see Nick like this and he hasn't. That he deliberately held back for all the reasons that Henrie assumes and now hates him for. Guh.

And I love how cocky (but also vulnerable) your DHen was in this. I love how his early arrogance is ultimately just him being uber-protective of Nick - something, as you know, that I'm a big fan of too.

Just...stunning. Good work! *fans self some more* How am I supposed to concentrate on work now? *sigh*

Re: i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 7, NC-17) tearupthesky November 3 2009, 14:08:15 UTC

OHHHHHH MANNNNN, I DEFINITELY THOUGHT NO ONE WAS GOING TO WRITE THIS PAIRING, and i was trying not to be sad because so many other amazing things got written, but secretly in my heart i WAS SO SAD.

THIS is a very accurate representation of my emotions when i saw these comment notifications in my inbox!!!!

godddd, i love how david LOVES NICK, even if they'll never be IN LOVE, him being so angry on nick's behalf, thinking nick wasn't even an OLD sixteen. David can completely understand having your first big gay crush on your hot teacher -- just, your hot teacher isn't supposed to take that and fuck you up the ass. That's messed up, man. daaaaaaaaavid ( ... )

Re: i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 7, NC-17) mardia November 3 2009, 22:19:26 UTC

...okay, my brain, it's pretty much gone now. Oh my GOD.

Re: i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 7, NC-17) starsimpulse November 5 2009, 13:46:43 UTC

That was awful. I mean, you were wonderful, but just God, why does my heart cry? feeeeeeeelings I caaaaaaaaaaan't fight. Just, sometimes I get to this place where I kind of get past all the shit that went down with Dick&Nick but then I realize that I'll never really be able to forgive him. Not really. Just, poor David.

Also, it took me forever to get the title? I read it and I was all "oh, that's funny" and then like a day later I burst out laughing 'cause I finally made the bikini connection. And then I laughed at myself.

ps- check out my future!manon icon. :)

Re: i'm not gonna b like "grudge sex eww" (Part 7, NC-17) park_hye_in December 2 2009, 00:44:13 UTC

YES, YES, AND MORE YES. this hits so many of my buttons.

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