TITLE: A Bed of Mystery
AUTHOR: Erin Giles
CHARACTERS/PAIRINGS: Jack/Ianto, Gwen
RATING: R
DISCLAIMER: Torchwood is the intellectual property of the BBC.
SUMMARY: Ianto’s keys have gone missing, but that’s not the biggest mystery surrounding Ianto today, and Gwen’s determined to get to the bottom of it.
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Jack, have you seen my keys? )
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XOXOXO
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...a bunch of keys attached to a novelty key ring.
Now I'm wondering what that key ring looks like. (Especially if Jack gave it to him.)
I love your wonderfully IC nosy Gwen! And here...
Gwen’s eyes flicked to the double decadence chocolate cake, her tongue darting out as it eyed the marshmallow swizzles, but she refrained. Rhys would have a fit if she told him she was too full for dinner again.
...she sounds like me :D
(Quick typo patrol, in case you're interested:
...tipping the pizza boxes into a black bin big...
(For a minute there I read that as "big black bin" :D )
...that he’d opened with a florish...
Er, "flourish.")
And your inspiration -- ‘Free pair of handcuffs with every frame bed’ -- made me LOL some more. (And reminded me of this, from a recent TV ad for memory foam beds: "BACK PAIN IN EPIC PROPORTIONS!"
Also, this, from the summary ...
...Gwen’s determined to get to the bottom of it.
Gave me a serious attack of Torchwood Gutter Mind, I'll have you know XD
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Gwen is exactly like me when I go in Starbucks. I keep telling myself I only ever need coffee, but my mouth never listens.
Thanks for pointing out the typos - shows you that two pairs of eyes can still miss little things.
Get your mind out the Torchwood gutter! Jack's living in there! :P Thanks for reading and the EPIC comments! ;)
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