Fic: Legacy

Feb 28, 2008 19:37

I blame this on the weather. It's been utterly miserable around here for the past three days; windy and bucketing and grey. Trying to rush to classes on slippery floors and commuting on packed trains is a bit of a kill-joy too. So I wrote some Reborn fic to make myself feel better. Even though it's, uh, kind of depressing. My dear f-list, be ( Read more... )

fic, katekyo hitman reborn!, gen, yamamoto/gokudera

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alhia February 28 2008, 12:03:59 UTC
That was... damn. That was the most depressing thing I've read in a while.
This was beautiful, the writing was really ... flowing and subtle, but eh, I guess it's just depressing seeing how things could turn out. Moving on, stopping being a guardian - keeping at some distance the only one of them who's a painful reminder of all of this - but yet still being one, though unable to protect anything.
And the end, gah.
... And it depresses me to think I won't dare reading this so beautiful fic again, precisely because it's depressing, ahah.
Anyway, I'm still completely in love with your fics =D I think I haven't spent any day of these past two weeks - holidays~! <3 - without reading at least one, ah ah! Thank you for writing these! :)

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teapoit February 29 2008, 01:22:54 UTC
;___; You're such a sweetheart. Thank you for the lovely comments and making the effort to read my writing when it's so structure-less and confusing, and your native language isn't even English. So much love for you~ ♥ Friends?

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alhia February 29 2008, 21:44:33 UTC
But it's nothing, really! I mean, it's natural. I am the one thanking you for writing these fics that I take so much pleasure to read. And english is my love, so it really doesn't count that it isn't my native language, ah ah! ;)
Oh, sure! I'm honored and very glad! ♥ Thank you!

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anonymous February 28 2008, 21:10:55 UTC
Depressing but beautiful. Most of what I think has already been said.

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teapoit February 29 2008, 01:25:51 UTC
I'm not sure if LJ notifies for anonymous comments but on the off-chance that you see this, thank you very much. :3

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endou February 29 2008, 10:32:44 UTC
Oh man. Epic win points. ♥
Loved every minute of reading this. Where I am, it is also raining quite a bit and it matches the weather.

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teapoit February 29 2008, 10:54:17 UTC
Yay! <33

Rainy days are awful but they tend to bring bouts of inspiration so... *puts up with* Hope the weather clears up over there~ and thank you for the comment.

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demanawaits March 1 2008, 19:57:28 UTC
sakj;fkjds why haven't I read this yet. D::
S-so good waaaahhh.

I love your characterization of Haru. I love how you slipped in the death as though it was just another request, and it was just all so suave and smooth.

running late with an appointment with death
Love the metaphor here. Just... wowowow amazing imagery. *____* <333

Thanks for writing thisss. Oh goddd.

(look I have a 8059 icon now! Ahaa <3)

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demanawaits March 1 2008, 19:59:21 UTC
(oh, and cute new layout!)

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teapoit March 2 2008, 00:41:12 UTC
Uwa~ Thank you. X3

I-I get backed up by my friends' entries a lot and sometimes skip over amazing stuff because I'm bliiiind I have selective eyesight~ XDD

Haru's really just a normal girl with a crush on a guy who creates a lot of trouble for her; it's sink or swim and then if the object of her affections dies, I think she'd grieve, but she'd backpedal pretty quickly.

...I wish I could take credit for the gorgeous death metaphor but I sponged it from this month's list of themes over at 31_days and wrote the paragraph around it. DD:

Hee~ Adorable icon~ ♥

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kat7077 March 4 2008, 06:10:21 UTC
Last line killed me dead. (I loved it)

Ack. My hectic schedule leaves little time to surfing the net, but I promise to go back and read through all of the fics that I missed because I am madly in love with your writing. (I'm looking at them right now and...resolve...weakening...)

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teapoit March 4 2008, 08:09:03 UTC
XDD Ah, I know how it is; real life always takes precedence no matter how shiny the interweb is~ Thank you for using your time to look at my stuff. :3

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