It was poor chapter planning. I suspect she thought that if she left us -- the readers, the characters, random people passing -- hanging, we'd come back for the next chapter. I further suspect it's someone with a very bad grasp on the concept of pacing.
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*laughs*
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I clearly need more cat vomit in my porn.
Did the author actually say they ran out of time in story notes, or was it poor chapter planning?
Separately, now I want to see that porn that is worth reading despite being completely fresh off the press. Does editing not happen anymore?
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Also, you're welcome. :)
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