Thank you, Dee. Your comment is very important to me. I'm very pleased you liked it. I have already writen another one. Yesterday I was striked by another bunny. This one and the other I mentioned will have a sequel. :D
^.^ Don't worry, Sera. I can't write unhappy endings for good. There will be a sequel. I want Don and Mac together, too. My next fic is a happy ine. I'll try to post it tonight (my tonight your today, I think...^.^)
Thank you so much for your feedback. I have writen three Mac/Flack fics already!!!!!! O.o Hope to post the third one next week. *hug* :D
Woo-hoo! Yeah! I did it! I read it! *throws confetti* See how many new things you get me to read? =P
loved it! Your writing is so painfully beautiful! I really like it. Very expressive. Especially enjoyed this bit:
And there was silence.
No sound, no heartbeat, no thoughts…
For a moment they stood like that. Eye to eye, blue on green, sadness and pain mingled with caring. Why… Because…no, don’t tell, don’t think it! Mac Taylor’s mind was loosing control over to his heart.
The same feelings were in their eyes and in their hearts and they got the answer to all of their questions in each other look. Love. Forbidden. Unfulfilled, chained in the depth of their hearts. Like a firefly in a dark lonely night.
LOL *gives you a party to celebrate* I'm so proud of you, and so honoured that you read my fic and liked it. I'm yet to go read yours (just got here now), yesterday the storm kept me away from the computer.
É dificil escrever o k eu keria estando tão limitada no meu inglês. Faltam-se frases e termos mais comuns e próprios dos personagens e das séries...faço o k posso! My Mac/Flack bunnies are very active. I wrote another one yesterday and I sent it to beta. I have another almost ready to post, I just have to make the pics for it.
Thanks, Nokas. *hugs you tight* You deserve lots of new shoes. *wink* :D
O inglês vai evoluindo, n te preocupes. Agora kando leio coisas k escrevi há ano e meio ou as acho demasiado simplistas ou têm construções gramaticais estranhas. Actualmente tenho um nível de inglês melhor e acho k posso dizer k vem das horas k passo na net a ler slash. =P
I should follow your lead and write more as well. The muses haven't cooperated yet. Hoping they will soon.
*hugs tight too* Hahahaha! Yeah I really have to go and get them! Hope it's not raining too much this weekend. :S
Thank you so much for your lovely review. I love this pairing so much I had to write something; there are so few fics about them. ^.^ I never saw season two or three. I know the actress that plays Peyton from 'Who's Joe Black' with Brad Pitt. I love that movie. *.*
I will post more soon. Hope you like the other fics too. :D
I adore the story that you knew already. But just thought I would comment on the beautiful art work that you have created to go with it. Stunning absolutely stunning. Gerat art great story and great feedback from you readers...*g* well done!
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A wonderful first fic. Can't wait for more.
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I have already writen another one. Yesterday I was striked by another bunny. This one and the other I mentioned will have a sequel.
:D
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~ sera
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Don't worry, Sera. I can't write unhappy endings for good. There will be a sequel. I want Don and Mac together, too.
My next fic is a happy ine. I'll try to post it tonight (my tonight your today, I think...^.^)
Thank you so much for your feedback. I have writen three Mac/Flack fics already!!!!!! O.o Hope to post the third one next week.
*hug*
:D
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loved it! Your writing is so painfully beautiful! I really like it. Very expressive. Especially enjoyed this bit:
And there was silence.
No sound, no heartbeat, no thoughts…
For a moment they stood like that. Eye to eye, blue on green, sadness and pain mingled with caring.
Why… Because…no, don’t tell, don’t think it! Mac Taylor’s mind was loosing control over to his heart.
The same feelings were in their eyes and in their hearts and they got the answer to all of their questions in each other look.
Love.
Forbidden.
Unfulfilled, chained in the depth of their hearts. Like a firefly in a dark lonely night.
Great work! *thumbsup*
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*gives you a party to celebrate*
I'm so proud of you, and so honoured that you read my fic and liked it.
I'm yet to go read yours (just got here now), yesterday the storm kept me away from the computer.
É dificil escrever o k eu keria estando tão limitada no meu inglês. Faltam-se frases e termos mais comuns e próprios dos personagens e das séries...faço o k posso!
My Mac/Flack bunnies are very active. I wrote another one yesterday and I sent it to beta. I have another almost ready to post, I just have to make the pics for it.
Thanks, Nokas. *hugs you tight*
You deserve lots of new shoes. *wink*
:D
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O inglês vai evoluindo, n te preocupes. Agora kando leio coisas k escrevi há ano e meio ou as acho demasiado simplistas ou têm construções gramaticais estranhas. Actualmente tenho um nível de inglês melhor e acho k posso dizer k vem das horas k passo na net a ler slash. =P
I should follow your lead and write more as well. The muses haven't cooperated yet. Hoping they will soon.
*hugs tight too* Hahahaha! Yeah I really have to go and get them! Hope it's not raining too much this weekend. :S
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~Andrea
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I love this pairing so much I had to write something; there are so few fics about them. ^.^
I never saw season two or three. I know the actress that plays Peyton from 'Who's Joe Black' with Brad Pitt. I love that movie. *.*
I will post more soon. Hope you like the other fics too.
:D
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