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There Were Four in the Bed by Darkrose

Mar 01, 2007 14:40

Title: There Were Four in the Bed
Author: darkrosetiger
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Pairings/Characters: John/Rodney/Teyla/Ronon
Archive: Please ask.
Rating: NC-17
Summary: The standard accident with Ancient technology makes everyone on Team Sheppard shift one body to the right.
Warnings: Umm...kind of cracky, I guess? Contains het and slash.
Disclaimer: So not ( Read more... )

rating:adult, author:darkrose

Comments 11

vissy March 1 2007, 22:48:45 UTC

Cute, hot, confusing plus NESTING! Mmm.

darkrosetiger March 2 2007, 09:58:35 UTC

Thanks! It was fun to write--though I finally had to draw a flowchart to keep who was in whose body straight.

And I think they'd make an awesomely cute puppy pile.

druidspell March 1 2007, 22:59:29 UTC

Mm. Confusing, but hot. :D

darkrosetiger March 2 2007, 10:02:49 UTC

Thanks! I know it's a bit confusing. If it helps, they were standing like this when John picked up the device, and everyone moved as follows:

John ---> Ronon
^ |
| |
| v
Rodney <--- Teyla

I had to draw it in order to keep it all straight.

briar_pipe March 2 2007, 00:07:30 UTC

Yup, still hot.

I love Teyla as a guy particularly. We hardly ever see that in gender transformation or bodyswap fics.

mecurtin March 2 2007, 00:37:35 UTC

You've been reading Ardhanarishvara, though, right?

briar_pipe March 2 2007, 01:32:18 UTC

(Geh. Repost for formatting issues.)

Yes, of course, but- but-

This probably isn't the place to get into it, but I find Teyla's reaction in that one to be... ooc for me. Also, it's taking way too long to get to the OT4, to the point where I think it's possible there will never be a happy ending (as I define "happy ending", i.e., everybody's in the body they want and loves everybody else regardless of what body they're in).

That said, I am enjoying many other aspects of the fic. It's a brilliant and enormous concept with excellent execution. My quibbles are small things stemming from personal tastes.

darkrosetiger March 2 2007, 10:04:32 UTC

Glad you liked it still!

I think Teyla as a guy would be fascinating. As a short person myself, I know that the first thing I'd do if I were in a body the size of Ronon's is spend a while just feeling tall' I can picture Teyla striding around, laughing because now she takes really big steps.

Thread 5

30toseoul March 2 2007, 20:25:04 UTC

"I didn't know I could do that," John says, looking over his shoulder.

That part made me grin -- I could hear his "wow, cool" tone of voice in that sentence.

And aww, nest of puppies. I will never get enough of picturing that. *g*

meret March 9 2007, 05:31:51 UTC

Hee! Great story! :)