Warriors Playing at Gentlemen, (Teal'c, Jack), [G]

May 01, 2009 21:22

Title: Warriors Playing at Gentlemen
Author: lovellama, aka Josephine
Recipiant: astrogirl2
Main Characters: Teal'c, Jack
Rating: G
Category: Gen
Spoilers: Window of Opportunity, Caddyshack
Summary: Jack introduces Teal'c to a game he's put his own spin on.
Word Count: 1,583
Prompts: Teal'c and Jack engaging in some ordinary human activity, with humor and snark, OR ( Read more... )

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astrogirl2 May 2 2009, 02:27:27 UTC
Bwahahahahaha! Oh, god, this is priceless! Thank you!

This bit...

Jack held up a battered ball with a barely recognizable Army seal on it. "Cheaper than therapy."

..is the point where I seriously started losing it. And then... The image of Teal'c in a kilt! Bra'tac! The C4! Bwah!

And, fortunately, I've seen just enough of Caddyshack to get the references. Jack would absolutely introduce Teal'c to golf with that movie. :)

Hee!

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lovellama May 2 2009, 02:43:01 UTC
Whew! :) I'm glad you liked it. I love Caddyshack and when I remembered the golfing from WoO, I knew that they would HAVE to be put together.

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tiamatschild May 2 2009, 03:03:53 UTC
*squeals* Oh, this is wonderful! And Kenny Loggins. Of course. And Teal'c bowing to the caddy! And Jack invited Bra'tac for the c4! Yes! :D

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lilyleia78 May 2 2009, 04:11:15 UTC
Very cute! And Caddyshack references for the win.

I am a little confused on what Jack's got against the Army though.

Great story, love the inclusion of WOO.

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lovellama May 2 2009, 04:15:56 UTC
Thanks. :) I've always gotten the impression that the Air Force has been looked down upon a little bit by the other branches of the military (my dad was in the Navy). And since I am a Navy brat, I couldn't let the seal be the Navy's, and by extension the Marines'... :D

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lilyleia78 May 2 2009, 04:26:22 UTC
I see! I'm an Air Force brat myself. Thanks. ^_^

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aurora_novarum May 2 2009, 05:15:58 UTC
Oh wow. This was great! It's been WAY too long since I've seen Caddyshack, but I love how you wove everything together, complete with WoO.

Teal'c in a kilt would be great.

The ending with Bra'tac is awesome.

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jaxomsride May 2 2009, 23:28:13 UTC
Considering where Golf was invented I'm not surprised Teal'c would like it!
Loved this fic.
Especially shooting golf balls through the wormhole and the C4 golf balls.

As a matter of curiosity have you ever read "How much just for the planet?" the Star Trek Novel by John M. Ford. Has the best golf course ever, better than Caddyshack!

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lovellama July 23 2009, 18:34:17 UTC
I think I did read that one, was it where the habitants gave Kirk a couch thingy to lay upon because of the Tiberius in his name, and they did Plan C (for comedy) to get the Federation and the Klingons (was it Klingons?) to leave them alone?

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jaxomsride July 24 2009, 17:02:35 UTC
The one and the same!

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