"His face drains of blood, spills over into his gut, thick hot acid and bile and twisting, terrible fate and all he can think is - Oh, God. No. - because it’s too soon." --->Usually more graphic than my taste, but I LOVE the imagery. Go figure.
Looking forward to see what else you have in store for us. :)
Oh, wow. (from Emma)
anonymous
April 17 2012, 22:34:47 UTC
Ouch. Wow. The imagery is fantastic and wonderfully gritty. Can't wait to see what happens, and whether or not she and he are okay, or just one, or not, or, or, or...
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"His face drains of blood, spills over into his gut, thick hot acid and bile and twisting, terrible fate and all he can think is - Oh, God. No. - because it’s too soon." --->Usually more graphic than my taste, but I LOVE the imagery. Go figure.
Looking forward to see what else you have in store for us. :)
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