Ten, Donna, Rated G

[dave7]

Title: Paper Mazes
Author: christn7
Rating: G
Characters/Pairing: Ten, Donna
Spoilers: None
Author's notes: Short ficlet for falulatonks. Slightly cracky, rather silly. First actual attempt at writing Donna.

Summary: “This is hardly my fault,” the Doctor says, folding his arms and leaning against the cell bars.

“Oh, save it for the judge, princess,” Donna says.

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Comments

[dark_aegis]

ROFL! FTW

I like this lots :) Good Donna voice, too!

[dave7]

Quick, you are. *g* And thanks - I was very worried about my Donna voice. :)

[sc_angel72]

Brilliant!! And how much do I love that she called him "princess"?!?

Bravo!!
More, more!!

[dave7]

Aww, I'm glad you liked it. :) I may write more Donna in the future - if I ever manage to build up enough courage to have a decent go. *g*

[wendymr]

Oh, he's so never going to impress Donna, isn't he? Even his skinniness - enough to get them out of jail - is held against him.

And she sees right through him too:
“We’re lost, aren’t we?” she asks, slowing to a stop beside him.

He shrugs. “Hopelessly.”

“I was right,” she says. “Couldn’t find your way out of a paper bag.”

Poor Doctor! He's whipped ;)

[dave7]

Whipped? Agh. No. No, no, no - first of all, Time Lords are not whipped. They're above the entire whipping processes - if they weren't though - if anything, they're the whippers, not the whippees. And also? Ten/Donna is icky. *g*

[wendymr]

Cracky Ten/Donna is fun! But I said nothing about Ten/Donna there, did I?

[dave7]

I think 'whipped' means a different thing on my side of the world. *g*

[fishface44]

Loved this line: “Oh, save it for the judge, princess,” Great interaction between them in this! Thank you!

[dave7]

I'm glad you liked it! :)

[unbrokensky]

Ugh, your Donna is PERFECT. Love this!! =D

[dave7]

Aww, such a relief to hear that. Thank you. :)