Wow, this just blew me away. The way you portrayed them growing up and the love that they have for each other was perfect. I love the way you set the tone for the story in the first part and then gave us glimpses into their growing up.
Some of favorite, heartbreaking, lines:
Dean isn’t saying anything but is screaming don’t leave, I love you, so you can’t leave, because I love you.
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But we’re not like everyone else, Sammy, Dean thinks, but doesn’t say. We’re not like them. Am I not enough for you?
Dean, Dean, Dean. His grief made my heart ache.
Beautiful moment between the Sam and Dean: Sam shrugs out from under Dean’s arm, wraps both of his own around Dean’s waist and rests his head on Dean’s chest. “Thanks for the fireworks.”
I could quote this whole page back to you, lol, but I'm going on to the next section now :)
God, I absolutely ADORE this... the little details of how the splotches of orange bloomed identical over their hearts during the paint-ball war, how Sam knew that Dean would have known that he wanted water and not soda...the grains of sugar sprinkling over the green table-top....pure heaven.
And that part about how the Impala ended up with DW & SW scrawled on her... and oh- how Dean didn't disagree when Sam announced he wanted to marry him, just told him that he couldn't tell other people 'cause they wouldn't understand.. Perfect.
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This invented scene should win some kind of award. The "thank you for adding to canon" award, or something. Just perfect.
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Some of favorite, heartbreaking, lines:
Dean isn’t saying anything but is screaming don’t leave, I love you, so you can’t leave, because I love you.
and
But we’re not like everyone else, Sammy, Dean thinks, but doesn’t say. We’re not like them. Am I not enough for you?
Dean, Dean, Dean. His grief made my heart ache.
Beautiful moment between the Sam and Dean: Sam shrugs out from under Dean’s arm, wraps both of his own around Dean’s waist and rests his head on Dean’s chest. “Thanks for the fireworks.”
I could quote this whole page back to you, lol, but I'm going on to the next section now :)
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And that part about how the Impala ended up with DW & SW scrawled on her...
and oh- how Dean didn't disagree when Sam announced he wanted to marry him, just told him that he couldn't tell other people 'cause they wouldn't understand..
Perfect.
onto the next part.
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