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merentha13 in teaandswissroll

Obbo 339 Reconsidering

Sep 14, 2018 17:26

Title: Reconsidering ( Read more... )

character: cowley, challenges: weekly obbo, character: bodie, character: doyle, genre: drabble

Comments 10

sw33n3y September 15 2018, 13:58:15 UTC

Ha, ha! Perfect! ...Seasoned operatives, used to cheating death on a daily basis, but nothing makes them more nervous than asking the old man for a raise. *applauds*

merentha13 September 15 2018, 17:00:27 UTC

Thanks! :-) Mr Cowley is a bit intimidating!

macklingirl September 15 2018, 21:46:53 UTC

Good use of the prompt. And a funny ending. Thank you, you made me laugh. :-)

merentha13 September 16 2018, 15:45:50 UTC

Laughter is what I was looking for! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.

cim3745 September 16 2018, 06:24:10 UTC

100 words well written and what a twist in your story or in my interpretation - thank you it was really fun.

merentha13 September 16 2018, 15:46:48 UTC

I think your interpretation was exactly what I was trying for ;-)

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

shooting2kill September 17 2018, 18:00:50 UTC

Hah! Good one and a great idea!

Love this:

“I’m re-evaluating the consequences.”

When it comes to Cowley... I don't blame him.

merentha13 September 18 2018, 21:34:29 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

cloudless_9193 September 17 2018, 19:35:51 UTC

Hilarious! :-)

merentha13 September 18 2018, 21:34:58 UTC

My job here is done! :-) Thanks!