Weekly Obbo challenge #272: Easter

Apr 08, 2015 09:49

Title: Communion
Author: Dawnwind
Pros-lib/Circuit Archive: yes
Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Rating: teen
Word count: 660

Written quickly and posted just as fast. I hope nothing is egregiously misspelled.

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genre: slash, challenges: weekly obbo, rating: teen, pairing: bodie/doyle, fiction

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sc_fossil April 8 2015, 19:13:10 UTC
Doyle all broody and Bodie all chocolatey. I like it. Thanks!

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dawnebeth April 8 2015, 20:37:44 UTC
Have to eat a Cadbury product of some sort on Easter! Thanks.

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merentha13 April 8 2015, 19:35:57 UTC
A lovely story. I was hooked after the first sentence - decimating chocolate bunnies indeed! *g* And Bodie's devotion to his partner is well written. Thanks for sharing this.

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dawnebeth April 8 2015, 20:38:23 UTC
Can't you see Bodie trying to decide which bit to eat first? Ta.

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snailbones April 8 2015, 19:53:43 UTC


What a lovely mix - Bodie all about the chocolate, Doyle typically broody... And then such a nice last line. Thank you!

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dawnebeth April 8 2015, 20:39:16 UTC
Thanks for reading. I have some of Doyle's same thoughts come Easter.

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ali15son April 8 2015, 20:02:45 UTC
thankyou so much for this and what a beautiful way to end your story on

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dawnebeth April 8 2015, 20:39:55 UTC
Glad you enjoyed. It came in my head several days ago when I was at work but damned if I had time to write.

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moonlightmead April 9 2015, 09:51:00 UTC
Aww. Love Bodie's remarks at the end, about seeing a man who died but came back to life. Aww!

And Doyle's final line: brilliant.

Thanks!

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dawnebeth April 9 2015, 15:27:35 UTC
Thank you for reading! Bodie's explanation was one of the first things that sprang to my brain when I saw the prompt word.

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