Weekly Obbo 239 picture prompt

[merentha13]

Title: Desire
Author: Merentha13
Pros-Lib / Circuit Archive: Yes
Pairing and / or characters: Doyle, Bodie
Rating: everyone
Word count: 464
Warnings: a bit of self indulgence...
Disclaimer: Just borrowing the lads, no copyright infringement intended

Comments

[sc_fossil]

Ohhh, ouch! Well done. I love how you wrote this, with the mirroring of the weeping willow to how Doyle's looks and feels. Nice work which means you've ripped into my heart. :) Thanks.

[merentha13]

I'm glad to hear you liked this. I wasn't sure it was going to work - thinking I might have overdone the angsty descriptions. Thanks!!

[snailbones]

I love that picture so much, and I love how you've used it. I can't see any relationship between them ever being easy, and that's just what you've written so beautifully. Thank you!

[merentha13]

It is a gorgeous picture. It inspired another story, not quite so angsty using the tree again - maybe I'll play with it a bit more.

Not easy - that is our lads! Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

[ali15son]

I love this story that you've written but I so want bodie to go running after his Doyle ..never mind this relationship was never going to be easy xx

[merentha13]

We will have to have drayce post another picture of the tree in springtime so I can write a sequel! *g* Exploring various versions of the lads relationship is challenging and fun. Glad you enjoyed this. Thanks!

[sw33n3y]

Oh nicely written! The last line ties it all together and describes the give-and-take of their relationship perfectly. :D

[merentha13]

Thank you! That give and take is what makes them so interesting! Glad you enjoyed this.