Weekly Obbo 184: Plan, Scaffold

[merentha13]

Title: Think
Author: Merentha13
Pros-Lib / Circuit Archive: Yes
Pairing and / or characters: Doyle
Rating: everyone
Word count: 100
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: Just borrowing the lads, no copyright infringement intended
Note - inspired by sw33n3y’s gorgeous fanart titled “Think Fast” (here: Read more... )

Comments

[shooting2kill]

Really liked this. Exciting, succinct and very clever use of the prompts. Thanks for this.

[merentha13]

Thanks! sw33n3y's artwork was very inspirational. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

[shooting2kill]

the short one word lines reflect the urgency the emotion that is flashing through his mind because flashes are all he has time for.

That's it! You've expressed perfectly what I felt about the piece.

[merentha13]

the short one word lines reflect the urgency
I'm so glad that worked. The scene in "Runner" and sw33n3y's art both had that air of tension that I wanted to capture. Thanks, Mate, for the kind words!!

[sw33n3y]

Oh that's it exactly! ..The rush of thoughts about what's happening around him, and what to do.

You gave such a complete picture of the scene by describing the physical and emotional elements of his flight-or-fight moment.

I loved that you captured the time-slowing down effect of this kind of situation as well.

I'll also be thinking of these lines when I see Doyle standing there in that moment, now.

I'm so chuffed that a work of mine could help inspire such wonderful writing!

P.S. I hope writing this has helped ease your own worry.

[merentha13]

I'm so glad you liked this! (and that's where the "worry" came in!) Thanks for the kind words. I'm happy that this fit with your intriguing graphic. *VBG*

[sw33n3y]

and that's where the "worry" came in

Oh I see! No need for that at all! :-D

[sc_fossil]

I like how you've worked in the graphic with your words. Good job. I could feel the tension.

[merentha13]

Tension is what I was aiming for! Thank you.

[snailbones]

You've captured that moment brilliantly, and it's a perfect match for the gorgeous artwork too. Wonderful!

[merentha13]

Thank you! The artwork is terrific, isn't it.