20 minute fic game: Erased

[draycevixen]

Title: Erased.
Author: Draycevixen.
Pairing: Bodie/Doyle.
Rating: Everyone
Word count: 522 words.
Notes:

Yeah... Erm... Written at 3:20am.

Comments

[roven75]

Umm. You should write more often at 3:20 am.

T'is good stuff. I like how it kept me spellbound, trying to figure out what was going on. Like opening a present, you don't know what's gonna be inside but you know it'll be good *g*

Nice tension throughout, too. Sooo, what have you planned tomorrow at 3:20 am?

[draycevixen]

Erm... thanks? *g* Tomorrow at 3:20am I have *dreaming* about the lads in mind, sleep permitting.

I plot faster than I do anything else in writing so I'm often surprised myself by where my story ends up going in these timed challenges.

[roven75]

Well, I do hope you get to sleep, hon, I really do. And dream of the lads :) I'm in awe though that you can get something as productive done at that time of night. Maybe we could sit you down at 3:20 pm and pretend it's 3:20 am? Ok, I'll stop now^^

[draycevixen]

If you can talk my uni in to letting me go home early I'd be happy to try. *g*

[solosundance]

Oh, love. I want to know you're tucked up in bed dreaming of fluffy bunnies at 3.20am. But whoah... your dark night of the soul writing is rather fabulous :)

[draycevixen]

Thanks... and thanks. ♥

I actually thought this was going to be a fluffy bunny when I started typing.

[merentha13]

3:20 am, huh? The night agrees with you! This was very tense and tricky. I enjoyed the slow reveal of what was going on - but I need to know the rest of the story! Well done!

[draycevixen]

I've written quite a bit of stuff during my semi-regular bouts with insomnia.

Thanks. I may have to work with this idea a little more.

[moonlightmead]

Oh yikes! Deception and lies and scary things. Is it bad to like it?

*is bad*

[draycevixen]

Well, I hope not... and thanks. :D

[snailbones]

Okay - I'm guessing you had cheese before trying to sleep?

I love the dark edginess, and that he still recognised his one true love Doyle in spite of everything. And who's been lying to Doyle?

Very nice luv.♥

[draycevixen]

Perhaps the problem is that I *didn't* have cheese? *g*

I typed away and then read it and went "oh, right." I think the answer is somewhere with Century House.

Thanks, petal. ♥

[snailbones]

*smiles sweetly*

*sends cheddar*

[draycevixen]

*wonders what sort of Pros ficcage cheddar would produce*