Escape (Fic)

[intradependency]

Title: Escape
Pros-Lib / Circuit Archive: No.
Characters/Pairings:  Bodie/Doyle, Doyle/Esther (offscreen)
Rating: Adult
Word count: 975
Summary: Set during Takeaway. Stuck with streetkids, Bodie rocks up at Ray and Esther's flat in search of adult company. Bodie in choice deshabille, pants around ankles, etc.
A/N: Part of this series (incomplete).

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Comments

[lukadreaming]

I love this! Beneath their usual backchat and sparky comments, there's a real air of melancholy to this.

[intradependency]

Thank you!

[roven75]

Nice one, liked the atmosphere and the idea of Bodie showing up outside the flat all lonely and down.
I found the story very erotic (despite the ringworm ;), and I just love how you manage to sneak in these short sentences that express so much, like Gun hand kept free by habit, Bodie held his cigarette in the same hand as the wine.

Considering your complaint about the ending line of drabbles, you've managed quite nicely with this. At least I think so *g*

[intradependency]

*laughs* Thanks! The ending had rather a lot of displeasing incarnations before I settled.