Apples to Apples: Chapter 10/13

May 28, 2008 09:05

Title: Apples to Apples
Chapter: 10/13
Author: tdesphtl
Rating: M (for earlier chapters)
Warning(s): none
AN: Well, we're nearing the end!! But no where near the end of the action. :) Much, much more drama-goodness to come, peeps!! So, I think I'm gonna go sleep now... Overnights shifts are a bitch. o.O

You don't know what you're talking about, so just shut up and make him better so we can be on our way )

apples to apples

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fixin_a_glitch May 28 2008, 19:26:12 UTC
A Cliffie! How did I know that there'd be one in this chapter as well?
Guh...Am looking forward to the rest, and this really made my day besides being off work today! <3

Can completely understand Cain's reaction to the old man's stories...would behave like that as well, and you really do have a way to get your writing come to life. *pets Ambrose*

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tdesphtl May 28 2008, 21:42:01 UTC
Thank you so very much!! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I wish I could say the same about the day off from work... I worked the overnight shift, got home at 7am, and they already have me working at 530pm. Dirty dogs. But thank you very much for the compliment!! And I love cliff hangers. I live for them. :D So I'm sure it will not be the last.
Later, Gator! Catch you in the next chapter.

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fixin_a_glitch May 28 2008, 22:31:21 UTC
Ooew....you worked the graveyardshift? Worked two½-3(can't quite remember how long ^^; (My memory is good but short and filled with unnecessary things LOL )months a 2 months only for 2 weeks, and then the rest of the time 1 straight month - weekends nightshift at my current work where I vik. at before getting a evening shift. Though on the plus side I know I did a great work during that time cause my old boss still asks me whenever we meet at work if I want to work during the night as well ^^; (he's the type whom only asks those he thinks works good/great.). (ak! How did all this sneak it's way in here?!)
And yeah...I got a love/hate relationship to cliffies. Love when I write them, hate them when I read the story that got them :p
Looking forward too it, but take ye time in typing - there's no rush, just a bunch of readers with cookies and pitchforks :p

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nuavarion May 28 2008, 21:45:24 UTC
Yep, Ambrose came from the Greek for Ambrosia, food of the gods. Anyway, I would love to hear more about this book and I am wondering if they will show it to Ambrose when he comes to and what will be said... I am enjoying this a lot.

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tdesphtl June 3 2008, 01:17:48 UTC
Yah! The book is a very important part of Ambrose's life. It might not show up again till somewhere closer to the last chapter, but I promise to squeeze it in!! :D

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tis022 May 28 2008, 23:17:05 UTC
WHAT!?! He's a man on a mission, he can't blackout! (well, I guess technically he can, as you just proved...) but still! I miss the happy fun times of my precious chapter 8! But of course I'm hooked for the next one.

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tdesphtl June 3 2008, 01:19:35 UTC
I miss chapter eight too. ;) Happy fun times indeed. *le sigh* But of course, the yucky bad times make the happy fun times all the better. :D

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candacestls May 28 2008, 23:44:57 UTC
'covering ears' lalalalalalalalala, I'm not listening to stuff about Ambrose, lalalalalalalalalala 'waving for Cain to follow my example'

I'm sure Ambrose has a perfectly good explanation......... for being the evil spawn of monsters and everything.

Good chapter, you're certainly keeping us off balance, I think I maybe standing on my head, not sure really! :D

'hand back on ears' lalalalalalalala............

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tdesphtl June 3 2008, 01:22:04 UTC
Ambrose can't help being the evil spawn of monsters!! DDDDD: It's just the way he is... but we love him anyway. But I certainly hope all the blood doesn't rush to your head!! That would be terrible... 'cause then you'd be too dizzy to read the next chapter!! o.O Sad day!!

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avari_maethor May 29 2008, 03:29:57 UTC
This story does not need to end. It's to good to end.

Am·brose [am-brohz]
-noun 1. Saint, a.d. 340?-397, bishop of Milan 374-397.
2. a male given name: from a Greek word meaning “immortal.”

I started a story called "Immortal Memory" based off that definition. It didn't go anywhere but yeah...

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tdesphtl June 3 2008, 01:24:59 UTC
I agree. I really don't want this story to end. I had it all planned out from chapters one to thirteen, and now it seems to have taken a turn for the strange!! *le sigh* I wish I hadn't put a chapter limit on it... *grumble*

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avari_maethor June 3 2008, 19:13:55 UTC
Well you are the author, you could always change it. -hint hint, wink wink-

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