Sins of the father

[tcstewart22]

A/n: I've never wrote anything before, may never write again. Lol. But thought I'd give it a shot...let me know what you think. And thanks in advance.

Sins of the father

He wants her more than he's ever wanted anything. Needs her in a way that makes it hard to breathe. Thinks it would be much easier in fact to slowly suffocate...feels like he is

Comments

[tcstewart22]

I had this in paragraphs. Don't know what happened.

[slm37]

You should definitely write again--keep honing your skills! Snaps for this being your first writing attempt!! I look forward to more:)

[tcstewart22]

Thank you! Yeah, I definitely need work. I really appreciate the feedback though, makes me want to try again. Maybe the next one will be happier.

[slm37]

Ohhh, I do not mind angst one bit! Makes the happy stories that much sweeter! Again, great job!!