Hey, sweetie. So, funny story. You kind of faked me out with this. I started watching for it on my flist Friday, but I didn't see it. I was actually getting a little worried. But then I had the bright idea (for I am a genius) of checking the comm, and there it was. You sneaky little back-dater, you!
I really enjoyed this, C. The dialogue is spot on and the interaction between the boys is fantastic. There's a lovely rhythm here that you maintain throughout. And my favorite aspect is how you reveal so much about their characterization in the way they speak. Even that first scene with Jensen and Sophia, it's like I could sense right away, exactly who and how he was.
You know why I wrote this. I only wish I could have gotten it finished sooner so that you could have...you know. But what I have written, I have written. And besides, the .pdf is uploaded so I can't change it without a hassle.
Thanks for indulging the Harlequin side of me. I'm glad you got a kick out of it! I'm glad you liked these boys.
Don't stray too far from your computer--Miss Eleven Page Rollover (go, you!)--because you'll be hearing from me soon.
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So. What I was going to say...
Sorry...can't stop staring.
(But I really am glad you liked it!)
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Thanks for sharing.
*hugs*
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*hugs you back*
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<3 & <3 & <3
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I love writing about places I know about--besides, nobody can say I got it wrong. (unless I got it wrong :-) )
Thanks so much for reading, and for commenting. Very glad you enjoyed it.
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I really enjoyed this, C. The dialogue is spot on and the interaction between the boys is fantastic. There's a lovely rhythm here that you maintain throughout. And my favorite aspect is how you reveal so much about their characterization in the way they speak. Even that first scene with Jensen and Sophia, it's like I could sense right away, exactly who and how he was.
Lovely job, bb, just lovely. ♥
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You know why I wrote this. I only wish I could have gotten it finished sooner so that you could have...you know. But what I have written, I have written. And besides, the .pdf is uploaded so I can't change it without a hassle.
Thanks for indulging the Harlequin side of me. I'm glad you got a kick out of it! I'm glad you liked these boys.
Don't stray too far from your computer--Miss Eleven Page Rollover (go, you!)--because you'll be hearing from me soon.
Loves all over you!
XXO,
C
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