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Challenge fic: Something Here Inside

Jan 19, 2008 00:01

Author: eponinesghost (EppieG)
Title: Something Here Inside
Pairing: Tracey/Kelly
Rating: PG-13-ish language
Notes/Summary: Written in response to the "Apologies" challenge .... (A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away).
Tracey/Kelly established relationship. Can be read as a continuation of If Ever I Fall, albeit a significant time later ...

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author: eponinesghost, pairing: tracey/kelly, fiction

Comments 16

shaych_03 January 19 2008, 09:16:37 UTC

oh lovely :) i particularly liked this line: At that observation, she felt the sting of a thousand cuts prick her own eyes, threatening to blur her focus in more ways than one.

so telling, so visceral.

it's lovely to see this pairing after so long :) thank you :)

eponinesghost January 19 2008, 16:28:49 UTC

Visceral ... I like that.

Thank you so much for the feedback. It has been a long time, hasn't it?

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eponinesghost January 19 2008, 16:30:56 UTC

Me too!

Thank you. It's an effort sometimes to get into her head ;)

joran January 19 2008, 16:12:08 UTC

Oh, how wonderful it is to hear Tracey's voice in your words. I loved her agonizing. And Kelly, tear-stained and defiant and gentle.

Those are our girls!

Thank you for such a gift. :)

eponinesghost January 19 2008, 16:33:42 UTC

I get the feeling she agonizes quite dramatically. Hee. And rarely.

And Kelly ... poor Kelly ... who doesn't get to say anything in this story. LOL (Good for her for slamming the door nice and hard, though.)

Tracey and I both had some unfinished business. Thank YOU for keeping the light on ...

tudinous January 21 2008, 05:02:06 UTC

Even after so long, you still unerringly write the Tracy in my imagination. Glad you're back!

tudinous January 21 2008, 05:04:47 UTC

Please pardon the breaking of convention with the misspelling of Tracey's name.

eponinesghost January 21 2008, 12:59:14 UTC

But of course. Anything for you.

eponinesghost January 21 2008, 12:58:42 UTC

It's weird how we share her, huh? ;) As long as she visits every so often, I'm good.

Thank you. Just pretend I'm like one of those little dogs who gets mysteriously lost on the family vacation clear across the other side of the country ... and then just as mysteriously turns back up at home years later ... a little worse for wear ;)

greenovalfruit January 25 2008, 15:04:36 UTC

Ack.

...

*thump*

Excuse me, I'll be back when I'm alive again. Eppie lives. OHMYGOD!

eponinesghost January 25 2008, 22:34:50 UTC

:: nudges you with my toe ::

Should I get some cold water?