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sapphire2309 May 17 2013, 08:33:50 UTC
Damn you. Make me cry while the sun's still in the sky so everyone can see, why don't you?
Neal is sometimes in great need of someone grabbing him and shaking him by the shoulders till his brain is straight again.

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tbffj May 20 2013, 14:02:30 UTC
There's something fragile about him, like his little facade of suave might break at any time. And I would very much like to see Peter (and El!) hold his little heart together.

Ugh. I love these boys.

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pjna3 May 19 2013, 19:43:39 UTC
Oh, oh, you made me cry with this. Love the writing style, so visceral from Neal's sad perspective, and almost stream of consciousness but better. Oh Neal! *hugs him* I think this really is canon, how he devalues himself.

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