Comments | tbffj: MMOM Day 5 FIC: Mumbles in the dark

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MMOM Day 5 FIC: Mumbles in the dark

May 05, 2013 11:49

Title: Mumbles in the Dark
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character: peter burke, mmom2013, title: m, character: neal caffrey, genre: preslash

Comments 9

daria234 May 5 2013, 19:46:47 UTC

Love this one too - wonderful!

turtlebaby_02 May 6 2013, 16:02:22 UTC

Thank you! :)

elainasaunt May 6 2013, 03:39:32 UTC

These are all great. Keep up the good MMOM work!

turtlebaby_02 May 6 2013, 16:01:43 UTC

Thank you! I intend to try for all 31 days, but I know my life. lol.

Thanks for reading!

lauracollared May 6 2013, 03:59:32 UTC

hooooooo boy! :D

turtlebaby_02 May 6 2013, 16:00:21 UTC

lol. Glad you enjoyed!

sapphire2309 May 6 2013, 15:33:43 UTC

I'm not entirely sure whether that's funny or hot or slightly sad or all three. But it was good!

turtlebaby_02 May 6 2013, 15:59:20 UTC

I think it ended up being little of all three. The original ending had Peter waking up and trying to cover with a story about a nightmare while he ran to the bathroom to hide the evidence. But then I went with slightly wistful Neal instead, because he's my favorite. lol

So thanks for finding the "this could have been hot and amusing" qualities in this. ;)

sapphire2309 May 6 2013, 16:30:02 UTC

Anytime :)