Day 13 - Something 'bout a Kiss [Peter/Neal/El] R

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Title: Something 'bout a Kiss
Author: turtlebaby_02
Fandom: White Collar
Written For: mmom 2014
Characters (Pairings): Peter/Neal/Elizabeth
Rating: R
Word Count: 390
Warnings: Unbeta'd
Disclaimer: Nope, not mine. I'm just playing.
Summary: And this way nobody ever has to say a word - Neal wiggles the bait and Peter takes it,
Author's Note: Late. So late. ugh.

Comments

[lanalucy]

This was sweet. Love the sense of anticipation Neal's got for whatever's next.

[turtlebaby_02]

Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you. Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

[elrhiarhodan]

No suck! This is gorgeous!

[turtlebaby_02]

lol, thank you! It means a lot that you'd say so. I literally wrote it waiting did my shift to end at work, in less than 15 minutes, on my notes application on my cellphone after shelving my first attempt and needing something. Sooooo, I'm aware that it's not - my uh, best work ever. So thank you for the esteem boost. ;)

[elrhiarhodan]

Can I make a tiny, tiny suggestion? Remove the self-deprecating comment at the end - I know you were just commenting, post-LJ cut, but it doesn't serve the story (which is really sweet and hot and delicious).

Also - IT DOESN'T SUCK!

[turtlebaby_02]

Done and noted. Self deprecation is kind of what I do best - I don't even notice I do it anymore most of the time. It's a little unnerving to be called on it, tbh, Not that it's not appreciated - because it is. Maybe if more people told me to knock it off, it'd be a habit I'd break eventually. lol

So thank you, really.