Fic: The Secrets That We Keep

Dec 21, 2013 01:35


Title: The Secrets That We Keep
Author: turtlebaby_02
Characters (Pairings): pre-Elizabeth/Neal (/Peter)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1800
Warnings:Spoilers from 5x01 and up, some pretty specific.
Disclaimer: Nope, not mine. I'm just playing.
Summary: Elizabeth has some guilt. So does Neal but he's not so good at sharing. Also some random talks of potential wooings that I ( Read more... )

genre: hc, character: neal caffrey, rating: pg, character: elizabeth burke, title: s

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embroiderama December 22 2013, 23:04:25 UTC
I love the honesty and the connection here--all of them are what they are and they all love each other, just the way it should be. Lovely!

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turtlebaby_02 December 29 2013, 07:21:19 UTC
I was stuck in full blown angst mode waiting for 5x09 to air, I needed a little hope. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

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joy2190 December 26 2013, 04:46:33 UTC
I like that Elizabeth accepts how much of a role she had in spurring Neal on, I didn't get that from the show. I think your version is much better!

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turtlebaby_02 December 29 2013, 07:23:29 UTC
I wrote this and then the show aired. She almost took responsibility there for a minute but Peter was so eager to blame Neal for everything that he just basically ignored her. Which was irritating. But whatever, show. lol. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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china_shop December 27 2013, 20:14:16 UTC
*hearts*

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turtlebaby_02 December 29 2013, 07:23:47 UTC
:) Thank you!

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daria234 December 28 2013, 00:21:41 UTC
Aww, this was really sweet and I love Neal telling her everything, and especially El being like 'actually there was going to be wooing, not so much from Peter' lol. Great fic.

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turtlebaby_02 December 29 2013, 07:25:59 UTC
Thank you! I honestly think Neal would like to just spill his guts. He thinks he doesn't care, but he's got guilt written all over his face. If someone would just... ask. And not in the recent Burke the Jerk way. *eyeroll* Everyone needs to sit down and have serious conversations.

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kanarek13 December 30 2013, 01:28:22 UTC
Awww, they love each other, no doubt about that. And they definitely need an honest conversation ♥

Lovely! Thank you for sharing :D

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