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Fic: Noodles

Aug 11, 2013 04:01

Title: Noodles
Author: Turtlebaby_02
Rating: Teen
Characters/Pairings: P/E/N
Spoilers: None
Genre: h/c (Squint, damn it.), Crack
Word Count: 1500ish
Warnings: None (unless your squeamish about Top Ramen)
Summary: Due to sapphire2309's prompt of "Substance addiction - Neal is addicted to instant noodles (inspired by yours truly ;) )" on my hurt/comfort bingo card - this ( Read more... )

character: peter burke, genre: romance, genre: hc, character: neal caffrey, character: elizabeth burke, title: n, hcbingo, genre: crack

Comments 32

sapphire2309 August 11 2013, 09:37:09 UTC

I'm so happy to have had even the tiniest hand in inspiring this piece of addiction and adorableness.

This may also help me get over my own instant noodle addiction. Or not :P

As far as h/c goes, I'd consider this comfort-heavy, so no need to squint :D

tbffj August 12 2013, 04:30:37 UTC

I honestly would never have associated Neal and ramen without you. lol. So the hand you had it in was certainly not that tiny! Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it (and saw the comfort in Neal's odd addiction.)!

sapphire2309 August 12 2013, 12:43:39 UTC

Anytime!

And I don't believe I said thank you for the incredibly awesome fill for my random(ish) prompt. Where are my manners?

rabidchild August 11 2013, 10:15:15 UTC

Adorable! God, ramen noodles *shudders* Haven't had them since college.

tbffj August 12 2013, 04:31:43 UTC

Thank you! I haven't had ramen in ages and this... does not really make me want to relive those days. ;)

sinfulslasher August 11 2013, 10:48:23 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful! I have to admit that my brain basically stopped at the very beginning because the image of Neal slurping that one noodle through pursed lips... GUH! But anyway! *g* It was funny and a wee bit angsty and a whole lot of schmoopy. *smishes them all*

tbffj August 12 2013, 04:40:29 UTC

:) Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yes, the idea of Neal sucking anything... whoa I'm in pervert mode tonight. So I'll go ahead and stop that train of thought before I get carried away.

snowdrop3100 August 11 2013, 10:51:47 UTC

Oh my, Neal Caffrey, refined Gentleman with generally expensive taste, addicted to cheap instant noodles ;).

Thank god for detoxing a la El and Peter :).

Thanks for writing and sharing.

tbffj August 12 2013, 04:43:49 UTC

It'd be quite the thing, wouldn't it? Who knows? Maybe cheap noodles go well with wine. Though I have this image of Neal, full Caffrey effect (from the top of his fedora to the soles of his shiny shoes) with a cup of soup in his hands... and I laugh.

Anway! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like it!

calis_1st August 11 2013, 11:15:09 UTC

Sweet (or, salty and MSG-y, in this case). You may have some strange dreams but it's nice that they aren't wasted. Thanks for posting this!

tbffj August 12 2013, 04:44:59 UTC

Sometimes my dreams are so nagging it's scary. lol. Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you liked it!