Scheme, Dark Blue, Dean/Jaimie/(Carter), NC-17

[taylor_serenil]

Title: Scheme
Author: taylor_serenil 
Relationship: Dean/Jaimie, hints of future Dean/Jaimie/Carter
Summary: Dean and Jaimie deal with the Carter issue.
Length: ~17K
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine. All for fun, not for money.
Warnings/notes: Explicit het with slashy overtones. Opening story in Trinity-verse. Established Dean/Jaimie. Brief mentions of past Dean/Ty,

Comments

[dime_for_12]

eek! I think you forgot the ending < /lj-cut> tag - the whole fic came up in my flist (as well as cut the bolded paragraph at the bottom?)

[taylor_serenil]

Like I said, LJ's Rich Text cut thing is not my friend. Sorry *makes sad face*.

[dime_for_12]

no problem! I just didn't know if it you had used the RTE or if you had tried coding it yourself.

*shakes fist at LJ*

[rothesis]

Very hot. I confess a small part of me wanted a conversation with the sex toy shop clerk ala "What do you recommend for a first time pegging experience?" but that would have distracted the focus of the story. I love Jamies matter of fact acknowledgment that neither of them react normally. Also like Deans sub tendencies coming to the fore.

[taylor_serenil]

First off, I'm glad you thought this was "very hot". It's always nice to know the porn worked for my readers.

That conversation might have been interesting, yes. I just didn't think either of them probably wanted to have it, which is why I had them do a google run for possibilities (which I ended up doing for this. Interesting in a porny sort of way.)

Neither of them is exactly the poster child for normal, so Jaimie admitting it works for them. I tend to think Dean here is probably the closest she's come to a real relationship, because he knows a lot more about her than she ever would have let Scott know. And I have Dean thinking to himself that she's pretty much the first girlfriend he's ever had.

Even canon Dean comes across kind of sub at times, so I just pushed that a little farther for this. I seriously doubt he'd sub for a random pickup, but him and Jaimie are serious here and he trusts Carter like whoa, so doing that for them is believable.

[whogeek]

The ending seems to just cut off there, but that actually makes sense because of it being the first story in the 'verse. Don't get me wrong, it's a good ending, but when I think about it in relation to other fics you've written, there's a certain fluidity to the ending that's not there. I was kind of expecting at least a small amount of the "how are we doing this" talk at the end.

I hope that makes sense.

[taylor_serenil]

Sorry the ending didn't work better for you. Part of the reason there isn't a "how are we doing this?" talk is because I really didn't have a clue what to have them say for it. So I kind of skipped that and threw in a paragraph or so at the beginning of Proposition about them planning their approach like the invasion of Normandy.

The original plan was actually to have this, Proposition, and Acceptance be one bigger fic. Writing them as separate ficlets turned out to work better for me.

[whogeek]

Yeah, I can understand not knowing what to say for that. Them planning it like a huge tactical manouver should be pretty amusing in a way. It kind of is a huge tactical manouver, and they should plan it as such.

I can see it as one big fic, but it does seem to work a little better as several smaller fics. I'll try and send you the bit of my Carter/Dean thing I've been working on since I got into the fandom. I was actually surprised at how long it actually is. Most of the time I don't notice how long something is until I actuall look at it length-wise.

[taylor_serenil]

They kind of just let it all hang out in Proposition once they get a moment where Carter's in an approachable mood, but they definitely have been contemplating their approach.

And then they keep working on him until he says yes in Acceptance. Which is in the porn shop at the moment--it needs a little more description because the initial version's too stripped-down.

This is the first time I've ever really written a verse as opposed to one-shots. And there's a few other things that if I get detailed bunnies for may make it into the masterlist. Specifically, I want Jaimie to take Carter lingerie shopping at some point, probably when Dean's under. (Dean wouldn't have the patience to just watch--Carter's all about the slow burn, so it plays right into his kinks. Although they are taking pics for his later enjoyment

[rorylie]

Okay, first, the sex is ridiculously hot.

Second, I still love Dean and Jaimie being like, super researchers when it come to sexytimes.

Third this: "Because you knew who I really was and liked me anyway." Dean can see the subtle hints of unhappiness in her eyes and hear them in her voice, and he'd dearly love a chance at whichever old boyfriend made her so sure she could be with someone who couldn't do at least that much. Her voice strengthens, and there's a tiny bit of amusement in it now. "But hell, I'd already had a taste of you and wanted more. I realized that you hadn't done anything about what you felt, because let's face it, you're not that good a liar." Her smile at that makes him feel almost like they're sharing a secret. "And by then, I could see at least a little of what you saw in Carter, too. If it was some random guy or girl I'd probably be getting out your .45 and using it, but he isn't random."

I can't even tell you how much I love that. Just so, so much.

[taylor_serenil]

I am very happy at "ridiculously hot".

Dean and Jaimie are all about "proper preparation prevents poor performance". And I really couldn't see them wanting to ask some random adult store clerk about the best rig for pegging, so I had them spend some time with safesearch off on google instead.

I may have told you this, but I think Jaimie's thought about pegging before. Dean's the first guy she's been with that a) she's comfortable enough with to even ask and b) is kinky enough to say yes and enjoy it, though.

That paragraph owes a lot to dime. The dialogue is nearly all me. What Dean's thinking was suggested by her and tweaked by me. So I'm glad we went together like peanut butter and jelly (or bananas, if you're Elvis :)).