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[taykash]

Title: transitory
Fandom: Arashi
Characters: Ninomiya Kazunari, Matsumoto Jun
Pairing: Matsumiya
Rating: G
Summary: Jun travels, Nino waits.
Author's notes: The second birthday fic for Nino! (third will be posted at nino exchange <3) This one is written in the same style as Sho's birthday fic.
Thank you, toinkydoink, for the last minute beta job ♥

Comments

[br_arashi]

Woooooooooooooooow!
This was... I don't know...
Heavy is not the word... deep, I guess!
So many things that keep them apart, only love is the answer to why they always hold to each other...
Sweet, quite said, but hopeful in the end!
Loved it!
Thanks for sharing!

[taykash]

thanks for commenting ★ I'm sorry I'm so late on this, haha. It's been a crazy summer!

[lakukuli]

Ah, love complicates when life's style and work come in the way ne
luckily they didn't forget there was still love between them and work it out from there :D
Thanks for sharing

[taykash]

<3 thanks for enjoying

[morninglights]

I loved the style, how you never actually wrote what Nino was saying, however as a reader you always exactly knew. The feeling this story gave was mostly melancholic and lonely, especially all the time when Nino thought about Jun travelling. Ohno's apperance bought a nice small twist, but then again I was happy that in the end, Jun and Nino never broke up. And Ohno's answer :)

And I really loved Jun here. How he just wants to find his place in life and how he's sure that as long as he always comes back to Nino in the end, it's okay. And then, when he understands that for Nino, it's not that easy, he gives him the change to break up with him, even though he still loves him ♥

Now I'm exicted for your nino exchange fic :)

[taykash]

I'm really happy to hear that you got exactly what I was going for :) thank you for reading <3 and your adorable icon. OH-CHAN CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FACE

[auburn_witch]

That was beautiful. I love the mood of it, the way they coexist and come together. This is also one of few fics with traces of a love triangle which doesn't hurt to read. It's incredibly comforting and languid how Ohno plays into this. Like he's the catalyst to make them realise what the other feels, and yet he's okay with that. I loved that non-angstness. :)

Thank you!

[taykash]

Thank you for enjoying! I love that Ohno worked for you here.

[r_1_ss_a]

I LOVE THIS SO, SO, SO MUCH. <3

I freaking love Nino's birthday, lol. (Maybe second to Jun's? LMAO)

I can't really pick my favorite parts without actually quoting your whole fic back to you but IF YOU TWIST MY ARM AND TOLD ME I HAD TO PICK, HERE ARE MY TOP TWO: (see, I can't even pick one, lol)

Jun had always come and gone, an ephemeron in Nino's life.

"I wander around," Jun says, his voice low in his chest, "but I come home. To you, Nino."

“I travel,” Jun murmurs, and Nino snorts a little at the anger seeping in, “but I come home to you. I don’t have to do that. I’ve come back to you every time since I was fourteen.”

And the comment by auburn_witch above me also says it all. Ohno totally played an important part and he didn't even know it: TWO FISH HOLDING FINS.

[taykash]

you're one of my favorite commentators omg
and for that
have this

[r_1_ss_a]

I saw this last night and I squealed!!!!!!

HOW AWESOME ARE YOU

TWO FISH HOLDING FINS

ALL MY LOVE <3