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TSFE: Chapter 13

Jun 26, 2005 00:45

Title: The San Francisco Effect (13/?)
Author: Tayefeth
Rating: NC-21/M/No kiddies/adults only
Pairing: SS/HP
Beta: The ineffable ook, who should be getting Chapter 14 RSN...
Author's Note: Previous chapters are subject to (not necessarily posted) revision. Contains graphic descriptions of rape, torture, and PTSD. May be triggering. I don't own these ( Read more... )

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Comments 20

reddwarfer June 25 2005, 22:02:40 UTC

I am so glad that you updated this story. It is a personal favorite. I love how you don't act as if homosexuality is like second nature in the Wizarding world. I believe that it would be more unacceptable than it is for us. I also like how rape is rape here. Not for pleasure. Not for jollies and the recovery takes the time it needs to. I also like the guilt the pain the fear and all of the reality you write in this. I adore this story.

Leila

tayefeth June 25 2005, 22:58:20 UTC

I'm so glad you find all of those things convincing. That's a large part of what I'm aiming for with this story.

littleroo27 June 25 2005, 22:50:41 UTC

Woo hoo - an update!!! I agree with everything reddwarfer said as well. The inability to accept what you don't want to believe happened in the first place is a reality to so many survivors, and I think it's very important to have to deal with and work through that.

tayefeth June 25 2005, 22:59:14 UTC

Yay, I'm so glad I'm portraying that at least a bit accurately.:-)

lherelenfeline June 25 2005, 23:25:53 UTC

So glad to have you back, and to have this story back.
It's one of the select few that actually stick in one's mind long after the reading's done, and its good to have more of it

tayefeth June 26 2005, 06:24:53 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad to be working on this story again.

stellahobbit June 25 2005, 23:30:52 UTC

I'm very happy to see an update of this fic - it's stuck in my mind since you've started since it's so different to what usually written.

I like how you wrote Harry this chapter. He's being supportive without being clingy, and allowing Severus to take what little control he has.

tayefeth June 26 2005, 06:27:58 UTC

Thanks. Harry's trying really hard not to pressure Sev. It's not easy, though.

psycho_tabby June 26 2005, 07:02:15 UTC

Aw, poor severus,
I was so glad to see this had been updated, Its one of the only WIPs I follow.
Actually I really enjoy almost every post you make, you find some very interesting links,
Thanks

tayefeth June 26 2005, 07:55:22 UTC

I'm afraid I rather enjoy torturing Severus. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and that you enjoy my links!