Comments | tayefeth: Accidental Voyeur: Worshipping

tayefeth

Accidental Voyeur: Worshipping

Jun 19, 2005 22:40

Title: Worshipping (Accidental Voyeur 7/7)
Rating: M for graphic smut of the m/m variety
Author's Note: This may not make much sense if you haven't read the earlier installments. There's certainly no plot without them... Beta-type comments always welcome.

( Worshipping )

fanfic

Comments 22

heh heh heh... ex_leianora730 June 19 2005, 20:14:59 UTC

yummy!!

Severus is so in character here, all self-denial, suffering, and uncertainty. He's just perfect! Harry is so... Harry! He's young, not subtle when it comes to begging for what he wants, and completely unaware of the conflict boiling away in Severus's mind. Wonderful! Thanks for sharing.

Re: heh heh heh... tayefeth June 19 2005, 20:31:19 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it.

littleroo27 June 19 2005, 22:27:49 UTC

wonderful!!! I hate to see it end though - I really want Severus to realize that Harry really don't have a desire to leave just cuz he got laid. But I love the picture of Harry laying on the bed with his wrists crossed. Nummy!

tayefeth June 20 2005, 05:30:51 UTC

Thanks! I'm rather fond of the image myself.:-)

stellahobbit June 20 2005, 02:26:16 UTC

The description of Harry stripping was mind-boggling. I never knew Muggle clothes could be so hot!

tayefeth June 20 2005, 05:32:01 UTC

blushes

I'm so glad you liked it.

psycho_tabby June 20 2005, 04:17:34 UTC

Oopa! Enjoyed muchly! Thank you.

It was nice having Harry having all the buttons for a change.
And Hot Sex.

tayefeth June 20 2005, 05:34:02 UTC

Oh, Sev had his share of buttons, as always, but since he undoes those everyday, he wasn't thinking about them.;-)

Very glad you enjoyed it.

lexique June 20 2005, 07:15:07 UTC

Yes!!! Your Snape is fantastic. The internal self doubt and conflict with the external snark - brilliant.

tayefeth June 20 2005, 07:57:36 UTC

Thank you!