Can't you see?

[tayarisa]

Title: Can't you see?
Pairing: Yamachii
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
Summary: Chinen is feeling sad.

What do you think you're doing to my heart? Do you really want to break it apart?

I'm so happy every time you smile to me, every time you hug me in the concerts, you touch my face or mess my hair, I  feel like flying. But then I hit the ground... hard, and

Comments

[tayarisa]

THANKS :) english is not my first language (is actually spanish) so sorry about the bad spelling. :) thanks for your comment, I really needed to know what people think.

[tayarisa]

I don't mind. please.

[andreecynthia]

I noticed in the comments,

hola, ablo en espanol y si quieres ayudo por favor preguntame si te pace algo

en serio este drabble era muy bueno para la primera ves, verdad?

para mi, Chinen tiene que decir le a Yama-chan algun dia.

continue, por favor?

welcome to LJ :D

[tayarisa]

en serio crees que es bueno? voy a pensar en continuarlo tendre que pensar en como chinen se confuesa. ;) Thanks for the comment.

[andreecynthia]

en serio! me gusto mucho :)

ah! continue :D

you're welcome ^-^

[tingke2104]

Awww. <3
Tell it to him Yuri! Say it out!

Ganbate! <3 Write more! :)

[tayarisa]

YEAH I'll continue this. And I have to say this I have read all of your fanfics and I really love them. :)

[tingke2104]

Yayyy~ <3
Eh?! You do? >//<
Haha. Then thank you for reading! <3

[mly_yamada]

this fic is very emotional...

chii is so poor... T^T

[yumechan_24]

this is short but i like this....

this is your first time????but i think you're really good and i prefer for the next....^^

[tayarisa]

Yeah this is my first fanfic. I'm writing a sequel for this fic, I'll post it as soon as posible. thanks for reading.

[yumechan_24]

you're really good in your first ne~~

really???a sequel????yay...i'll waiting..

you're welcome...^^