Those Who Sit in the Back

Oct 16, 2007 17:40

Title: Those Who Sit in the Back
Heroes Fiction
Author: taxidryer
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Words count: 760
Spoilers: 2.03 - Kindred
Characters/Pairings: Caitlin, Peter
Summary: She grew up with outlaws and although she often forgets, she is one herself.
Posted:heroes_fic, peter_caitlin, heroes_peter.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my dorkiness.
Huge thanks: to tracyj23 for the very ( Read more... )

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Comments 29

just_smiling October 16 2007, 22:57:07 UTC
That was really good. I like the character descriptions. Congrats!

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taxidryer October 17 2007, 12:46:26 UTC
Woo! I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks a lot!

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epiphany_gun October 16 2007, 23:05:55 UTC
You are cruel! After waiting so long for him to open the box I need resolution dammit! This story was so good it hurt.

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taxidryer October 17 2007, 12:50:47 UTC
After waiting so long for him to open the box I need resolution dammit!
Hehe! I guess we'll have to wait for the show to give us the answer... Isn't it nice we have fan fiction in the meantime?

You are cruel! This story was so good it hurt.
I know, I can't help it! I'm a sadist!

Thank you so much for your comment :o)

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epiphany_gun October 17 2007, 16:09:02 UTC
Yeah, there needs to be MORE FIC! And does it really do any good if it just makes you squirm MORE?

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taxidryer October 18 2007, 00:25:51 UTC
Heee! I'm not done with Heroes. I'm currently thinking a lot about Petrelli dynamics... We'll see what comes from that!

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lastwordslinger October 16 2007, 23:22:22 UTC
I love this. The observations about the bar patrons and which one Peter is like, the way she feels about him opening the box, her dual life... This was just amazing. Thank you for sharing it! :D

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taxidryer October 17 2007, 12:52:15 UTC
Thank you so much! Me has a big smile :o)

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taxidryer October 17 2007, 12:58:33 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! *happy dance*
Thanks a lot :o)

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saestina October 17 2007, 00:20:14 UTC
Woo! Welcome to the dark side. I'm so glad you're turning your wonderful powers of description and character insight towards Heroes. This is really lovely and subtle and sad, and you've really fleshed out Caitlin for me in a completely believable way. This is my favourite:

Sometimes she just wishes she was uglier so she could stop hoping.

Love it, darling!

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taxidryer October 17 2007, 13:05:28 UTC
Hurrah! I'm so excited!

Sometimes she just wishes she was uglier so she could stop hoping.
I suspect this pairing isn't too popular because they want to see Pete with a Barbie, but that's exactly why I like it. She's not a Barbie and yet she knows how to get a man!

Thank you so much, hun! Let's pray for the muse to stay vigorous :o)

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