Unfinished Story

[tasuku_kyota]

Title: Unfinished Story
Pairing: Takaki Yuya x Yamada Ryosuke (TakaYama); slight TakaNoo and OkaNoo
Type: Oneshot
Genre: Romance, slight angst, hurt/comfort
Disclaimer: Boys aren’t mine. The idea is mine.
Summary: -
Warning: My English is bad. No proofreads. FAILED

A/N: This is a companion for my Rambling Story

Comments

[mi_and_yaya]

Omg... It's cute... So Yuya did love Kei... I'm sorry for thinking you're a bad boy! *bows*
Yuya you should listen to your heart. It wasn't right of your mom to force you to break up with Kei, but maybe it was your luck. It saved you from being confused. You know Kei is happy now, and Yamada can make you happy too. Please talk with Kei and Keito and stay friends. Happy Ending...
It's somehow melancholic, it has the feeling of a quite sunrise when it's still early, everything is quiet and the air is fresh... It has the same feeling. It's still cool night, but soon there will be a bright sunny day. You know what I mean, don't you, tachan?
Thanks a lot for this darling <3
~Yaya

[tasuku_kyota]

WOW!!! Wonderful comment
You concluded everything ^^
Nice nice nice
Yesss it's happy ending even if takayama isnt official nee

Ah but--I dont understand what you mean??
Uhuhuu i am sorry, slow respond is here TwT
Please explain to me darling

[mi_and_yaya]

This story has a somehow melancholic feeling, just like a beautiful sunrise. Can you imagine it? It's still dark, the air is cool, and you are sitting somewhere all alone, it's quiet, there is no sound beside your own breath and the beat of your heart. You watch the sun slowly rising... You know there will be a bright and wonderfull day, but still you are sad cause a wonderfull clear night full of stars is going to be past in a few minutes. It's a melancholic and calming feeling to watch the sun rise... but still it's beautiful. You have to imagine this picture...
If you get a grasp of this feeling, you can imagine how I felt reading your story. Kei and Yuya had a wonderful relationship (clear starry night), but now it has to change (Sunrise, dawn). They can be assured because both of them have someone who they belong to, tghey both will have a bright future (bright sunny day). Still it's melancholic... I'm bad at explaining things, but I hope you understand now ;)
~Yaya

[tasuku_kyota]

Aaaaahhhhh :OOO
I got it now!!! LOL

But--but, when you explained like this, somehow I am being sad as well :"(
Like, your explanation hurts to my bones
Maybe 'cause i am takanoo bias so when you mentioned they have someone else and they should be apart, I feel like my heart torn apart into pieces :"""

P.S: i love your icon lol

[juju905rote]

Oh! Now I see. Takaki wasn't a jerk after all. I should have known you wouldn't make him a really bad guy.
And you wrote TakaYama pairing! I'm so happy. Let's spread more TakaYama love toooo.
And I'm glad Inoo smiled back at Takaki. I hope he finds out Yuya wasn't a jerk--but I want him to stay with Keito. And everyone seems like they will be happy.

[tasuku_kyota]

Orz
You right.... After all I cant make yuya as a bad guy
I love him too much TwT
Altho I want to make him out of character

Yes!!! Let's spread moaaar takayama love honey!!
But my takayama isnt as good as your fic bebe hehe

[juju905rote]

But your Yama-chan is adorable here!! You should write about him more since he is your ichiban isn't he?

As for Yuyan I don't mind if he's always good :)
But if Inoo finds out Yuya was good, maybe he will wanna get back together again...?

[tasuku_kyota]

Because yama is my ichiban so basically i ship him with nobody except yuyan, cause i trust yuyan a lot huhu
I am such a possessive older sissy to yama lolol

But....let's see what happen next ahaha
I want to write one more story about this, but dunno if i have time or not
If i dont have, then the story just ended this way, darling <3

[lu_mi_na]

I wonder when was the last time I read takayama fanfic!!!
Yamachan is soooo adorable and lovely here~
This is sooo cute but I can't help feeling sad ;_;

[tasuku_kyota]

Do you like takayama honey?
I ship takayama but of course takaino for the win!!!! XD

Why sad sweetheart? Cause yuya got hurt? Huhuu
I can't imagine on his position too TwT

[lu_mi_na]

yeah I like takayama
actaully I like all jump pairings XD

right! it is too painful for me T_T

[tasuku_kyota]

dont worreh
i'll write happy ending for our majesty takaino in other stories hihi
we love them so maawwchh <333

[sayukino11]

um.... um.... no comment????
nyahahahah... I only wnat OkaNoo... LOL! I'm so mean.... tehehehe.....

otsukare~

[tasuku_kyota]

Okanoo is together bebeeehhh dont worryyyy abouut thaaat X"""333

i'll lock yuya to yama <3