Need You Now

Aug 30, 2016 22:22

Foreword:

This is a contribution for alchemicink because she always amuses me with her great fics. And this one is specially for you, Holly, even if it isn't as good (even far from good). Inspired by Lady Antebellum's Need You Now which originally I planned for takaino, maybe in another time :D. Enjoy ( Read more... )

fan fiction, takaki yuya, oneshot, hikaru yaotome

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alchemicink August 31 2016, 02:34:52 UTC
Cries because this is so angsty and adorable ♡ I LOVE IT. I'm just gonna read through it again and spam with my thoughts :D

I'm used to broken promises /clutches heart/ this feels like such a problem the two of them would have. And oh man, Hikaru's busy while Takaki is not. It hurts because it's true.

The rain is a nice touch. Really sets the mood of everything

Takaki drinking whiskey in the barrrrrrr :D :D :D aesthetically very nice. Also i like how both of them realize they shouldn'tbe angry at each other but haven't said anything yet.

I'm glad Takaki chose not to hang out with random dude from the bar. Good job Takaki

Takaki went to Hikaru's even though Inoo's was closer! (sorry Inoo) but also DON'T DRINK AND DRIVE TAKAKI

The apology is lovely :) and also my favorite line is: don't force a key that doesn't actually fitAnd the ending is adorable ( ... )

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