Playing Dress Up

Mar 21, 2011 01:41

Parts of this have been in my head for months, but the other night I couldn't sleep and this came to me instead, so. Thanks, muse?

Playing Dress Up )

zoisite, diet angst, fluff, monster socks!, ami

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galaxylily March 21 2011, 15:45:29 UTC
<3 This is wonderful, truly. One of the best (read: few but still) A/z fic's I've ever ever read.

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ellorgast March 21 2011, 22:17:40 UTC
:O Oh wow, are you kidding me? There's not a ton out there, but still. I'm so flattered, thank you!

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satine86 March 21 2011, 17:39:43 UTC
OMG!!!!!!!!! I love Monstersox and I FUCKING LOVE THIS PIECE SO HARD!!!

I can't even start quoting my favorite parts because it would end up being the entire thing! And I think I'll just run around now like a Bieber fangirl on a sugar high (AKA V).

When Sasha arrived at Mina's door looking like a gothic Mr. Darcy

Ummpf YES PLEASE!

Fangirl Ami is fantastic!! Knew she had that in her, deep down! HA! And just everything about this whole thing is PERFECT! The characterization, the situations. The non-dating and slow development between them. Just the entire tone. And The Incident!

but she remembered the way his hand slid comfortingly over Jaden's back, long fingers tracing the length of his spine, and her own back tingled in wonder of how it would feel to have that hand stroke it in the same way.

Oh, Ami you are so, so gone!

"So... that skirt that you wore to Makoto's party, that wasn't you ( ... )

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ellorgast March 21 2011, 22:51:57 UTC
Thanks so much, Satine!

Fangirl Ami is fantastic!! Knew she had that in her, deep down! HA!

Oh, she sure did! And nobody knew. She's that clever.

Oh, Ami you are so, so gone!

Oh, Sasha you are so, so gone!

They really are.

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ARGH anonymous March 21 2011, 18:50:15 UTC
I HAVE TO DO ACTUAL WORK SINCE IM AT WORK BUT I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT IM HUMPING YOUR ANKLE AND I'LL NEED ABOUT 20K CHARACTERS TO PROPERLY SLOBBER ALL OVER THIS!!!!!!!!!!!

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SHIT venusorbit1 March 21 2011, 18:51:12 UTC
THAT WAS ME, V!!!

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Re: SHIT ellorgast March 21 2011, 22:16:45 UTC
I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR COMMENT.

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Re: SHIT venusorbit1 March 22 2011, 05:31:45 UTC
DO YOU KNOW WHY I'M SCREAMING AT YOU???? DO YOU???

BECAUSE YOU HAVE DONE WHAT MANY OTHERS (INCLUDING MYSELF) HAVE ATTEMPTED TO AND FAILEDWHAT AM I TALKING ABOUT ( ... )

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Re: SHIT ellorgast March 22 2011, 06:21:44 UTC
A REALISTIC CHARACTERIZATION OF A/Z.

OH STOP, you make me jealous all to hell with your Z/A and we've barely seen them yet!

THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I WANT TO DO IN CB BUT HAVE NOT THE GRACE TO DO SO.

So does this mean that you're inspired to work on CB now? PLEASE SAY YES.

The way he slowly woos Ami without scaring her off is incredible, and it seems he's a genuinely nice person on top of that.

HA he is, but he's also snarky and selfish and needy and clingy. But it's too early for Ami to notice that.

BWAHAHAHA what the fuck happened? Jaden jumped out from behind Makoto and got a lightening bolt in the face??

PRETTY MUCH. I think I referenced The Incident waaaaaaaaaaay the fuck back in Monstersocks The First, when Mamoru was thinking about how Jaden and Makoto needed to stay the fuck away from each other before thunderstorms because he had never seen so many electrical burns. I was told (probably by you!) that I needed to expand on that, so, here we are. It will probably get mentioned again at some point.

I can just ( ... )

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*_______________________* elianthos March 21 2011, 20:22:46 UTC
I'm in a A/Z heaven right now. Seriously XD. AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH <33333

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Re: *_______________________* ellorgast March 21 2011, 22:16:30 UTC
Yay! Thanks Eli!

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Re: *_______________________* elianthos March 22 2011, 16:13:24 UTC
I've marginally recovered from the awesome ( ... )

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Re: *_______________________* ellorgast March 23 2011, 01:45:00 UTC
I'd totally melt If a guy would do that for me.

I know, right? Curse reality.

I need the details of her hairdo for my dirty business, if you can: Abby spiked the back, but left the bangs down? Any ref pic? :DOH REALLY. Okay, after looking, I think this is the most realistic depiction of what Abby probably did: http://www.hairstyleswebsite.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/07/choppy-haircuts1.jpg... )

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