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coffeecommunity December 11 2009, 11:01:19 UTC
I'm really glad that you did this chapter through Taylor's perspective, because I honestly don't think i could've made it through Demi's or Selena's. It also gives an interesting answer to the Taylor/Miley that I honestly never saw coming last chapter. I mean, ending up together yes, but already together with Taylor as a possible homewrecker? Not at all. I also really love how great of a friend Miley is here, and through the whole story, really. She tends to Demi's wounds but then is the first to barrel in and hold Selena, being completely honest with them both always. Plus it's kinda pathetic how much I wish I could be at that concert with Miley and Taylor...

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addicted2tony89 December 11 2009, 17:07:52 UTC
First off I want to say that I liked how you wrote most of the chapter through Taylor's eyes. I had been kind of thinking that the reason Miley's marriage had ended was because she wanted to be with Taylor, but this chapter confirmed that for me. I'm also happy that the chapter wasn't written in Selena's point of view the entire time because I think my heart would have broken even more for the girl when she confronted Demi. I think it was perfect how you told it from Taylor's point of view. It was almost as if even we, as readers, were watching the fight from far away. Hopefully now Demi can really see how her actions have affected Selena and that she couldn't get away with what she did that easily. I really can't wait to see what happens next.

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coffeecommunity December 11 2009, 17:35:27 UTC
Hey, I think you accidentally replied to me instead of leaving a separate comment. Totally cool by me, but I don't think she'll get the notification that you commented on the story, since I got the notification instead. Hopefully I'm making sense here. You can just copy/paste it or leave another one or something, or do nothing, whatever works for you. But I definitely loved reading it, haha!

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tashamiller2k December 12 2009, 02:27:54 UTC
Interestingly I did get a note about that comment and this one!
I think because it's in my own journal it lets me know about everything that's going on.

Thanks for leaving this comment though! It made me smile that you went to the trouble to point it out for my benefit :)

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xena_rulz December 11 2009, 19:51:17 UTC
I really liked this chapter, Taylor's view was interesting.. I can't wait to see how all turns out..

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tashamiller2k December 12 2009, 02:28:59 UTC
Thanks :D

One more part to go!

There is also an epilogue after part 11, I'm still debating if it will get posted at the same time.

Thanks for reading :D

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spashley20 December 12 2009, 03:30:56 UTC
ugh, totally broken up about this. and i completely agree with coffeecommunity about it being in taylor's perspective.

on one hand, i'm like, hell yeah! demi had it coming!

and on the other hand, i'm like...poor heartbroken, messed up selena :(

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tashamiller2k December 12 2009, 05:22:06 UTC
Thanks for the comment. I'm pleased the Taylor perspective went over so well.

Yea poor Selena, she's got a lot to deal with now.

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caliali31 December 12 2009, 08:11:11 UTC
This was a great chapter!! I can't wait to read how this all will end.

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let_me_stop December 12 2009, 09:18:31 UTC
I really liked that this chapter was through Taylor's eyes. I think Demi deserved that because Selena is just so sweet, but then there's the other part of me that's like "No! Demi needs hugs because she's messed up !" But Selena wins. So yeah.

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