I'm really glad that you did this chapter through Taylor's perspective, because I honestly don't think i could've made it through Demi's or Selena's. It also gives an interesting answer to the Taylor/Miley that I honestly never saw coming last chapter. I mean, ending up together yes, but already together with Taylor as a possible homewrecker? Not at all. I also really love how great of a friend Miley is here, and through the whole story, really. She tends to Demi's wounds but then is the first to barrel in and hold Selena, being completely honest with them both always. Plus it's kinda pathetic how much I wish I could be at that concert with Miley and Taylor...
First off I want to say that I liked how you wrote most of the chapter through Taylor's eyes. I had been kind of thinking that the reason Miley's marriage had ended was because she wanted to be with Taylor, but this chapter confirmed that for me. I'm also happy that the chapter wasn't written in Selena's point of view the entire time because I think my heart would have broken even more for the girl when she confronted Demi. I think it was perfect how you told it from Taylor's point of view. It was almost as if even we, as readers, were watching the fight from far away. Hopefully now Demi can really see how her actions have affected Selena and that she couldn't get away with what she did that easily. I really can't wait to see what happens next.
Hey, I think you accidentally replied to me instead of leaving a separate comment. Totally cool by me, but I don't think she'll get the notification that you commented on the story, since I got the notification instead. Hopefully I'm making sense here. You can just copy/paste it or leave another one or something, or do nothing, whatever works for you. But I definitely loved reading it, haha!
Interestingly I did get a note about that comment and this one! I think because it's in my own journal it lets me know about everything that's going on.
Thanks for leaving this comment though! It made me smile that you went to the trouble to point it out for my benefit :)
I really liked that this chapter was through Taylor's eyes. I think Demi deserved that because Selena is just so sweet, but then there's the other part of me that's like "No! Demi needs hugs because she's messed up !" But Selena wins. So yeah.
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I think because it's in my own journal it lets me know about everything that's going on.
Thanks for leaving this comment though! It made me smile that you went to the trouble to point it out for my benefit :)
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One more part to go!
There is also an epilogue after part 11, I'm still debating if it will get posted at the same time.
Thanks for reading :D
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on one hand, i'm like, hell yeah! demi had it coming!
and on the other hand, i'm like...poor heartbroken, messed up selena :(
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Yea poor Selena, she's got a lot to deal with now.
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