Fic: She Falls Apart - Seven

[tashamiller2k]

Comments

[kittyspotneko]

well yay everything seems to be going great now! .. *looks around for the sky to fall* o.o

[tashamiller2k]

hehe thanks for the comment
*finger poised on big red button*

[kittyspotneko]

O________________O NO!! NONONONONO NO!!! *covers the big red button* please please please please pleaseeeee dont doooo it!!!

lol

[catzmg1990]

Aww! Demi, the perfect gentleman! Please don't press the big red button :(

[tashamiller2k]

Of course Demi is looking out for her girl ... now.

Hmmm we'll see about the button ;) *mwahahaha*

[krackel20]

"Really she’s become the perfect gentleman."
yeah, the perfect gentleman who rapes people.

i can honestly say i hate this demi, (i don't hate the fic, i actually LOVE this fic and do a little happy dance whenever it's posted) but i absolutely cannot stand this demi.

i cringe everytime selena says she can trust demi, and that she's changed. i feel so terribly bad for selena, especially when she's going to find out it was actually demi. she's prob going combust from the anger.

*knows the big red button will eventually be pushed*

[tashamiller2k]

(i don't hate the fic, i actually LOVE this fic and do a little happy dance whenever it's posted)
I'm glad my fic is making you do happy dances.

I'm also kind of glad you're cringing, because when I'm writing it that is the sort of mentality there, that despite all these actions now it doesn't take away from what she did.

Thanks for the comment :) I hope you like how everything plays out in the end

[coffeecommunity]

I love this fic, and the character development you've got going on with Demi. I like how at first she's different only slightly, and only for Selena. Like, she wants to protect her and love her, yet still be who she is/was before, and that can't happen for long. Demi's slowly starting to change completely without even fully realizing it (evidenced by the scene in the nightclub), and she's becoming the person that Selena can trust again. However, I know that the big red button, as you like to call it, will get slammed soon and the shit will hit the fan once Selena figures out what really happened that night.

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks for the comment :)

I'm really happy you're enjoying the character development, I really feel it was important for Demi to grow up through this and not just be completely heartless.

But yea, eventually Selena has to find out the truth, I think that's pretty obvious.

[buffaith]

I'm not sure if I love or hate Demi in this chapter. Can't wait to see the next part. :)

[tashamiller2k]

Thanks, updates should be coming along a bit quicker now :)