Comments | tashamiller2k: Fic: She Falls Apart

tashamiller2k

Fic: She Falls Apart - Three

Nov 04, 2009 22:08

fic: she falls apart, pairing: demi/selena, type: multi-chapter, fandom: rpf - disney

Comments 21

28doomdoom28 November 4 2009, 10:22:47 UTC

YAY an update! :DD
This is really developing *has a party*
And OMG demi! I'm really disappointed in her! :( :(
GO MILEY!! :DD
I really love this! I loved the idea of them partying off Miley's divorce too. It's just so...iunno...I can't find the words but yeah xD

tashamiller2k November 4 2009, 10:29:36 UTC

*joins the party*

Thanks for the comment :)
I could seriously imagine Miley having a party if she ever got divorced, it sort of seemed natural for her.

28doomdoom28 November 4 2009, 22:21:34 UTC

it does. it does... HAHA now I want to go to one of Miley's parties xD She just seems so fun Oh we should go crash it xD

coffeecommunity November 4 2009, 10:28:09 UTC

I love this story, and how well you manage to convey emotion. I was beginning to hate Demi more and more, but this chapter has redeemed her (somewhat) for me; that said, I'm interested to see what happens next with her, especially now that she's subconsciously acknowledging that she wants Selena to be more than just a one night stand.

I love the way you've written the relationships between the four girls, especially Miley and Selena. Miley seems to have a soft spot for her, even if Selena doesn't really like her much; Selena is still friendly despite that, and Miley's concern near the end and her willingness to defend Selena's honor is adorable and so Miley. Do I sense some Taylor/Miley here too? Guess we'll find out...

tashamiller2k November 4 2009, 10:31:41 UTC

I'm so glad you love this :) Thank you!

And I'm glad Demi is a bit redeemed for you. I want there to be more to her just wanting a one night stand with Sel, because it's SELENA and of course she'd want more.

kittyspotneko November 4 2009, 14:56:56 UTC

HahHa demi fails or wins depending on how u look At it loved it

tashamiller2k November 4 2009, 18:40:34 UTC

Ha yea it does depend how you look at it.

Thanks for reading :)

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tashamiller2k November 4 2009, 18:42:08 UTC

Yea Demi does suck

cybertam87 November 4 2009, 16:38:30 UTC

woot! update! and how dare demi take advantage of drugged Selena. boo. but at least she is silently admitting to herself selena means something more then just a notch on the bedpost! and hah, i have a soft spot for Miley, and her running off to go beat up someone on Selena's behalf just makes me like her more

tashamiller2k November 4 2009, 18:43:43 UTC

Of course Selena would be more than a notch on the bedpost. As messed up as it is that's why she went there again.

I have a soft spot for Miley, and I think she has a soft spot for Selena ;)