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Thirty-one: Timeless

Sep 21, 2007 21:01

August 31st, 1991

The kitchen window is fogged over with a combination of the chill morning early-autumn air and Sirius’ shower. The sky outside is blue, the kind of blue that red-gold leaves silhouette themselves against. It doesn’t smell of summer any more, burnt grass and lemonade. It smells of September, new parchment and fresh ink, ( Read more... )

timeline: hp: 1991, challenge: barefootboys, relationship: remus/sirius

Comments 16

fireskies September 22 2007, 10:56:12 UTC

.... *tries not to cry from joy*

this should have been canon. actually scratch that, for me this is canon.

Love this, the way you make it feel so easy and natural. the three of them really do fit perfectly together.

tartancravat September 22 2007, 21:15:33 UTC

:D Thank you. I do wish it was canon.

REMUS SIRIUS BAREFOOT BOYS jodikat September 25 2007, 08:08:56 UTC

THANK YOU FOR FINISHING THIS BEAUTIFUL, FUNNY, BITTER SWEET STORY. THANK YOU FOR THE HOPEFUL, HAPPY ENDING, (SO RARE IN REMUS SIRIUS FICS). YOU HELD OUT FOR THE ENTIRE 31 DAYS, SOME PEOPLE WANDER OFF AND ARE NEVER HEARD FROM AGAIN! MY FAVORITE CHAPTER IS THE ONE WITH REMUS AND SIRIUS CAMPING AND SKINNY DIPPING, AND REMUS WONDERS IF SIRIUS IS SELKIE OR FEY. WHAT A BEAUTIFUL PICTURE THAT CONJURED IN MY HEAD! PLEASE KEEP WRITING. (SCAMPERS OFF TO FEED CATS AND THEN CHECKS OUT YOUR OTHER FIC!!)

Re: REMUS SIRIUS BAREFOOT BOYS tartancravat September 26 2007, 00:15:19 UTC

:D Thank you for the rather lovely review (apart from the capslock). :D I promise I shall keep writing, though school and NanoWrimo are very likely to get in the way in the meantime.

kuro_nyoko September 27 2007, 07:22:05 UTC

This was really beautiful. Not just this chapter, but all of it. I've followed it from the beginning and I'm sad to see it over, even though this ending was amazingly beautiful and hopeful and just made me all sorts of tingly and happy inside.

tartancravat September 28 2007, 04:03:35 UTC

:D Thank you.

newyorkangst September 30 2007, 01:35:43 UTC

I'd like to write in spanish so I could tell you in all the possible ways HOW MUCH I LOVE IT, HOW BRILLIANT You are.

Siriusly, You made my whole year :D

P.S: PLEASE, KEEP WRITING!

tartancravat September 30 2007, 04:47:15 UTC

:D Well, I took Spanish in middle school, but I don't remember enough that I'd be able to understand anything you'd say.

I promise to keep writing, though it'll be a while. I'm doing NaNoWriMo this year, and that'll take up my time.

locked_up_panda November 25 2007, 19:26:34 UTC

ep!
Piggie I love you, I almost called you Anna, I've been nanoing to much (psht, as if)
anybe
a)Stealing le prompt. eventully.
b) Can I write a fic based around Dream? if I credit and link to it and what have you?
and on a completely out there note c) MOG 46k!!!!!
also d) I <3 you.

locked_up_panda November 25 2007, 19:27:41 UTC

Um wft. Livejournal's waked...this was supposed to be a coment on the fic you *just posted* that I *clicked on* with a ll the sentence prompts

tartancravat November 25 2007, 20:17:18 UTC

There were more sets of words, too, but I can't remember what the community I got them from was called. Yes, you can write a fic around it. Huzzah for 46k! I <3 you too.