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Five: Thanks

Aug 11, 2009 20:03

( Sirius waits in the kitchen after Remus leaves... )

timeline: hp: 1982, genre: au, challenge: dogdaysofsummer, relationship: remus/sirius, fandom: harry potter

Comments 6

werewolfsfan August 12 2009, 11:07:18 UTC

Nice to know my of the background on your AU! But this hurts:

Hours later, he is still sitting on the floor, the refrigerator settling a chill in his back, composing endless answers he will never send to Remus.

But I trust that you'll lead on......

sambethe August 12 2009, 13:24:07 UTC

I am very much enjoying these.

batmanboxers August 12 2009, 22:32:26 UTC

This was gorgeous!

molsymo August 13 2009, 17:30:37 UTC

you capture the awkwardness and longing of an unresolved relationship so well. poor boys. i hope you're able to keep this going, your arc has been heartbreaking and wonderful so far.

miss_sabre August 17 2009, 22:30:02 UTC

Good lord in the heavens, you're good.
Kind of randomly, I really liked the bit about spelling the notes. It was a very nice little detail.
Very nice