first ds fan fic... yes, ive entered the Land of Doom

[taroly1888]

Hope im posting right. please tell me if im not.. i know how to make comments but i have no idea about my own LJ.

My first ever ds fan fic.. no, in fact my first ever fic that i've posted.

So, please comment, advice, insults, i'll take anything me!

Title:
Untitled ('cos a) I haven't thought of a title yet and b) I just started writing and didn't

Comments

[primroseburrows]

This is good. :) I like Ray's voice, I can really hear it.

[taroly1888]

thanks. i will be using original dialogue in any other fics i do but i can just never seem to finish them. i have about 12 sitting on my HD and they're all either halfway through (if im lucky) or just the bare minimum in note form. *sigh* my muse likes to take impromptu vacations - that's what i blame it on.

thanks for commenting! glad you like it.