The Octal Organization

[taricalmcacil]

Title: The Octal Organization (Chapter 1)
Fandom: The Big Bang Theory/Stargate SG-1
Author: taricalmcacilGenre: Mystery/Friendship

Comments

[alex51324]

Nice! I hope there's more Sheldon v. McKay coming up; those two in a room together has got to be worth seeing.

Do you want some beta help with the next part (or this one, if you haven't posted it publicly yet)? It's very good, but there are a couple of minor things that threw me out of the story--the biggest one was Penny saying, "Thank you, Captain Obvious" when the thing Leonard said was not particularly obvious. Now, as the biggest problem sentence, that's still pretty small. The other problem sentences were smaller, but I'd be glad to point them out if you like.

[taricalmcacil]

There should be a few more Sheldon/Rodney scenes coming up. I'm still haven't decided on the ending though, because throwing them together could result in a double homicide.

I'd love that! Would you mind terribly PM-ing me any mistakes you find?

[alex51324]

Sent!