Moments That Take Your Breath Away part 2 (1/1)

[tardismate]

Title: Moments That Take Your Breath Away part 2
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[wildwinterwitch]

Very Ten, this rush through the time he had together with her. It captures their romance well, and the ending is just as heartbreaking as the image they left us with.

[tardismate]

Thanks, I was hoping it didn't feel too rushed, but I did want to capture the frenetic feeling of series two and his headlong rush into it. I didn't think I'd done justice to Doomsday, but as long as the emotion of that came through I'm reasonably pleased with it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing,love, I appreciate it :)

[wildwinterwitch]

You've captured the frenetic feeling quite well, and Doomsday gets its fair share. I gather to him it went by in a blur, and now that he's reliving the events of the day, going through all the emotions. And that is beautifully done.

Now, it would be interesting to see his take of SE/JE as a sequel, maybe?

[tardismate]

'Now, it would be interesting to see his take of SE/JE as a sequel, maybe?'

Funny you should say that...*smirks*

It should be up later tonight...provided my Lonely!Ten muse comes up trumps and doesn't go off crying in the corner...

[salimali]

Heartbreakingly sad, especially knowing what happens when they meet next x

[tardismate]

Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing :)