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After the Fall (5/?)

Jul 09, 2009 17:34

Title: After the Fall (5/?)
Author: TARDIS_Mafia Rating: PG-13 (R/NC-17 in later chapters ( Read more... )

character: charles gunn, character: cordelia chase, character: james noble, character: spike, character: wesley pryce, character: human!ten, character: martha jones, character: fred burkle, character: angel, character: tenth doctor, pairing: human!ten/martha, character: mickey smith, fanfic: after the fall, tv: doctor who, character: jack harkness, character: lorne

Comments 8

syien_island July 10 2009, 03:00:29 UTC

Jasmine!? Wonder is Cordy's freaking out (she did give birth to her). InsanelyJealous James is a bit hawt, but I hate to see him hurting because of it.

Now did you just misplace Martha's eyes in a bowl of grapes, or accidently dropped them in your baby turtles tank?

tardis_mafia July 10 2009, 04:53:12 UTC

Jasmine!? Wonder is Cordy's freaking out (she did give birth to her).

Oh yes...the crazy bitch is back!

InsanelyJealous James is a bit hawt, but I hate to see him hurting because of it.

I love Jealous!James too.

Now did you just misplace Martha's eyes in a bowl of grapes, or accidently dropped them in your baby turtles tank?

Nope; you'll have to wait and see.

lunasoltierra July 10 2009, 06:45:29 UTC

This is fantastic. I'm glad you brought Jasmine. She's one of the best villains of Angel. What is Cordelia thinking right now, I'd be a bit freaked out if I were her. I love how you mixed the characters and I think you're doing a great job writing them exactly in character. I feel so bad for Martha losing her eyes and James and the Doctor jealous is HAWT. Update soon I can't wait to read the next chapter.

tardis_mafia July 10 2009, 14:07:21 UTC

Thank you.

I haven't seen Angel in a long time, to be honest, so I was hoping I had the characters down. Gunn, Spike, and Fred I think I've done pretty good, but Cordelia kinda seems OOC to me, but I'm strugglin'! LOL.

Just wait until next chapter... :D

80sgirl80 July 14 2009, 06:12:17 UTC

WOW! This chapter was intense! This story is definately awesome!

tardis_mafia July 14 2009, 13:55:44 UTC

Thank you. It'll get more intense later on. :D

abstruse_fangrl July 27 2009, 09:10:50 UTC

He could almost imagine James and Martha making out in her office, on the couch, and in the dark leaving them to just feel each others’ bodies with fingers, lips, and tongues.

Sounds like the Doctor's about 30 seconds away from heading to his bunk!

“She’s safer here with me than she is with you, and at least I know how to treat her properly.”

Go James, go!

tardis_mafia July 27 2009, 14:10:32 UTC

Sounds like the Doctor's about 30 seconds away from heading to his bunk!

LOL, yeah - a bit horny.

Go James, go!

Uh huh!